Primeval drabble: The Forgotten

[knitekat]

Title: The Forgotten
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Nick Cutter
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 402: Forgotten. Thanks go to Fred for casting her eye over it.


Nick sat in his strange office and just stared out into the atrium. So many things had changed since he'd stepped into the past and away from her side.

How could no one remember Claudia? She'd been an integral part of the team, the liaison between them and bloody Lester.

It made Nick wonder how many more people had been lost as if they'd never existed due to the anomalies? Forgotten by friends and family, people just moving on without ever knowing they should grieve.

He wondered if any woke in the night, sensing some loss but never knowing why.

Comments

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

That works well, particularly the last line. Very evocative.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks. The muse came up with the idea and it just had to be written, so good to know it worked.

[goldarrow]

Very nice.
The last line brings the horror home perfectly.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Good to know it worked.

[thelibraniniquity]

Ohh, very nicely done.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[eriah211.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was touching and so sad. Great drabble!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Poor Nick had to think like this.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Very good.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

Oooh, that's a good one :-D

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*bows* Thanks and glad you liked it.

[cordeliadelayne]

Aw, very moving drabble.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good to know it worked, poor Nick wasn't happy about the situation.

Thanks for reading.

[dreamer-98.livejournal.com]

A great look at Cutter's perspective.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good to know it worked and thanks for reading.

[fififolle]

Ooh! Good bloody point...

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

It has had to have happened before - even if no one remembers.

Thanks for reading.

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

Meep, poor Nick and Claudia and all the others who have vanished... Evocative and very good questions to ponder

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Definitely poor everyone. Good to know it made you ponder.

Thanks for reading.

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

Sad thoughts, but I'm sure Nick had them. Nicely put together.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Poor Nick was shocked by what happened. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[fredbassett]

Very neat last line :)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good to know it worked, poor Nick would have to wonder.

Thanks for reading.