Primeval drabble: The Forgotten

[knitekat]

Title: The Forgotten
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Nick Cutter
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 402: Forgotten. Thanks go to Fred for casting her eye over it.


Nick sat in his strange office and just stared out into the atrium. So many things had changed since he'd stepped into the past and away from her side.

How could no one remember Claudia? She'd been an integral part of the team, the liaison between them and bloody Lester.

It made Nick wonder how many more people had been lost as if they'd never existed due to the anomalies? Forgotten by friends and family, people just moving on without ever knowing they should grieve.

He wondered if any woke in the night, sensing some loss but never knowing why.

Comments

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

That works well, particularly the last line. Very evocative.

[goldarrow]

Very nice.
The last line brings the horror home perfectly.

[thelibraniniquity]

Ohh, very nicely done.

[eriah211.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was touching and so sad. Great drabble!

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Very good.

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

Oooh, that's a good one :-D

[cordeliadelayne]

Aw, very moving drabble.

[dreamer-98.livejournal.com]

A great look at Cutter's perspective.

[fififolle]

Ooh! Good bloody point...

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

Meep, poor Nick and Claudia and all the others who have vanished... Evocative and very good questions to ponder

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

Sad thoughts, but I'm sure Nick had them. Nicely put together.

[fredbassett]

Very neat last line :)