Primeval Drabble: Gasping for Air

[knitekat]

Title: Gasping For Air
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Abby Maitland
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For P100 prompt 932 – Out of Breath. Episode coda?


Abby cried out as she was grabbed from the boat.

She barely managed to gulp a breath before the water closed over her head.

She tried to struggle free, to reach the surface, but the creature held her fast.

Her lungs strained for oxygen, the urge to open her mouth, the need to breath almost overwhelming even as she fought to resist.

Her vision began to grey as she felt her resolve falter. Her lungs were on fire as she was propelled towards a bright light.

Before bursting through the surface, clinging to the cover as she gasped for breath.

Comments

[goldarrow]

Wow, brilliant!

Really shows what she must have felt as she was taken!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*bows* Thank you. It took some time to sort it out. Luckily I had the idea before Sunday, otherwise I'm not sure it would have been done.

[fredbassett]

Very vivid! And scary.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*bows* Good to know it came across like that. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

eek!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Abby will be fine, even though she's probably eeking too.

Thanks for reading.

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

Ooh, nice insight!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*bows* Thank you.

[cordeliadelayne]

Exciting!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thank you, although I think Abby would like a little less excitement :)

[fififolle]

Ooh, vivid!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*bows* Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.