Primeval drabble: Asking For Forgiveness

[knitekat]

Title: Asking For Forgiveness

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 100

Characters: James Lester/Mrs Lester(OC)

Rating: 12

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

Warning: Angst

A/N: For the P100 Challenge 154 Past Prompts, No 103 “I'm Sorry”. Sequel to Seeking Forgiveness and followed by Living In Hope. Thanks to Fred for looking at it. Cheers.

James' breath catches as he hears the front door and then the sharp tap-tap of shoes approaching.

He swallows hard as the door opens.

Taking a deep breath as he turns, James' heart fills with love at the sight of his wife standing framed by the hall light.

So beautiful.

They just stare at each other for a heartbeat and then another.

Before she can speak, James drops to one knee and holds his hand out to her.

His voice cracks with emotion. “Please forgive me.”

Begging with his eyes for another chance.

Praying for her to say yes.

Comments

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

Eek! And now I hope she gives him that second chance!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

You aren't the only one, James is too. Thanks for reading.

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwww, how could you say no to that!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, James is certainly hoping she will say yes.

[canadian-jay.livejournal.com]

GAH.

YOU EBIL EBIL WOMAN. (Er, you, not his wife.)

Sequel. Now. *glares*

(Ahem. This translates to: awesome, tense, and omf she had better say yes!)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*evil grin* I should hope you aren't calling his wife evil, James wouldn't like it.
When does this challenge end? *vbeg*
Glad you enjoyed it.

[canadian-jay.livejournal.com]

No, no he wouldn't! I was most definitely calling you evil. xD
Urm, tonight, I think! (No, seriously. :D)
^_^

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

I'd only really be evil if I didn't post the next bit (I think I've got to midnight?).

[canadian-jay.livejournal.com]

Yes, yes you would. (And yeah, that sounds right. In GMT, probably, hence my thinking of 'tonight')

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

See, I'm not evil *g*

[canadian-jay.livejournal.com]

So it would seem... This time. ;D

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

If I was evil I would have gone with James' wife's momentary blip *eg*

[bella-farfalla.livejournal.com]

*sniffs* I mean really, how could she not forgive him after that?

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*passes tissue* It would be hard, wouldn't it. (nods). Thanks for commenting.

[joereaves.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[arianedevere.livejournal.com]

Never mind sequel, I want a PREquel to find out what he did!!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Well, he was late for something important. This is the 4th drabble of a set, the first was called 'Far Too Late' (it is on my masterlist or follow the links back to it). Thanks for reading.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Oops, that's the 3rd drabble in the set.

[fredbassett]

Poor James! She'd better forgive him or I might have to hunt her down.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*grins* Glad you liked it. I'm sure Mrs Lester wouldn't want to upset you.

[unseen-quill.livejournal.com]

Awww. Poor Lester, I hope this ends well.

Really good. :)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Lester hopes the same. *blushes*

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

meep. Poor Lester.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

I know, I iz being mean to Lester by dragging it out for him. He's still hopeful.