knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2015-08-29 09:53 pm
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Primeval drabble: Out Of Darkness

Title: Out Of Darkness
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Matt Anderson
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 434: Sensory Deprivation. Thanks go to the wonderful Fred for looking it over for me.



Matt felt he'd been blind, deaf and anosmic before stepping through the anomaly from the future.

He'd grown up in near silence, no songs or idle chatter for fear of attracting the future predators.

He couldn't remember smelling the sweet scent of flowers as a child, only stale air and the stench of too many unwashed bodies.

Everything had been in muted shades, not the vibrant colours of the world he found himself in.

Taking in all the sights, sounds and scents, Matt vowed that he'd stop the Great Disaster. No one should live in the world he came from.

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2015-08-29 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Great look at Matt

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-08-29 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, glad you liked it.

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2015-08-29 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)

Beautifully captures Matt's experiences & determination

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-08-30 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
*bows* I'm never 100% with Matt, so good to know he comes across.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2015-08-29 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Very good.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-08-30 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, glad you liked it.

[identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com 2015-09-01 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)

Great observations. Matt must feel he's constantly on sensory overload in our time.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-09-02 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Matt probably did to start with, now he just enjoys them.

Thanks for reading.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] green shirt stephen)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2015-09-05 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely look at Matt.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-09-05 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, good to know I got Matt right.
fredbassett: (fredbassett)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2015-09-05 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice look at things through Matt's eyes.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-09-06 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to know it worked, I'm never sure with Matt ;)

Thanks for reading and for looking it over for me.
goldarrow: (Default)

[personal profile] goldarrow 2015-09-24 10:04 am (UTC)(link)
Nice background on Matt.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-09-24 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to know it worked and thanks for reading.