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knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2010-03-13 10:53 pm

Primeval drabble: The First Rock

Title: The First Rock

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 101 (sorry)

Characters: Abby Maitland/Connor Temple.

Rating: 12

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

A/N: For the P100 Challenge 149: Rock. Just a bit of fluff. Thanks to Fred for the beta.



Tears glistened in Connor's eyes as his heart filled with so much love he thought it would burst.

She was so perfect.

Connor couldn't believe he was responsible for such a beautiful child as he cradled her close in his arms, rocking her for the first time.

His heart melted as her eyes sleepily opened and looked into his own.

Connor vowed to protect her against everything and anything.

He would always be there for her.

For his daughter.

A soft cough had Connor looking at Abby, a smile gracing her tired face. “You'll be the best dad ever, Con.”

[identity profile] bella-farfalla.livejournal.com 2010-03-13 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWWWWW *wibbles* beautiful!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-13 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, it just had to be.
ext_27141: (Abby & Connor)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2010-03-13 11:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwww, that was so sweet I think my teeth are hurting! *g*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-13 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks and passes toothbrush.

[identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com 2010-03-13 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww. Connor is a Daddy.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 05:07 pm (UTC)(link)
*g* Glad you liked it. It just went fluffy on me.

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
That's seriously cute!

PS: If you want to get it down to 100, you could lose 'so' in line two *g*.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, it just had to go cute.

Thanks and I did consider that, but I think it's more Connor with the 'so' in it.

[identity profile] 6th-dr.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 12:39 am (UTC)(link)
I felt that way with my own daughter, very nicely written!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to know it came across well. Thank you.

[identity profile] unseen-quill.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
Aw! Connor as a daddy. :) A little weird, but very cute. :)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, *g* I think Connor with be a great dad, but just not necessarily a 'good' one, he'd be having too much fun.

[identity profile] unseen-quill.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol, I think he'd be a pretty good one too (if rather bad at the discipline aspect) he's just so young to me still it's odd to see him with a child of his own, even a few years down the line. :)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 09:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep, I can't see him telling his kid off, he'd be having fun with them instead, though a kid might make his 'grow-up' and take things more seriously.

[identity profile] unseen-quill.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Abby would definately be the rule enforcer of the family. :D I envision dentical puppy dog eyes when they were in trouble for something.

That is true, that would probably help him ground himself more. Just knowing this person is depending entirely on you for their care and safety. I think it would probably freak him out to some degree, but also make him think twice about doing anything stupid that he might have done before.
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[personal profile] fredbassett 2010-03-14 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
That was lovely :)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it and thanks again for the beta. Cheers.

[identity profile] madcatt82.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww, that's simply adorable!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, I felt the need for fluff.

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 07:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww! Cute! That's what fatherhood must and should feel like.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I think it should too.
cordeliadelayne: (hero nick)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2010-03-14 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwwwwww!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-14 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you and glad you liked it.

[identity profile] tia198.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
Awww this is so cute, I really hope we get to see something like this on the show!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, I felt the need for fluff. Unfortunately, I wouldn't hold my breath for that.

[identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com 2010-03-15 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
*melts happily into a puddle of goo*

That is just tooooooooooo cute! :D

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 12:10 am (UTC)(link)
Just so long as your happy goo *g*

Glad you liked it.

[identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 12:53 am (UTC)(link)
Very happy goo. xD

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2010-03-16 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

*melts and iz ded from cute*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, though, oops. Quickly revives deinonychus_15.

[identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! Yes, he'd make a great dad - he's just a big kid himself :-)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. He'd love the fun bits of being a dad, Abby would have to be in charge of them both *g*

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2010-03-19 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
He will too!

[identity profile] tia198.livejournal.com 2010-04-03 06:33 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwww this is so adorable and yay for Abby and Connor finally getting together!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-04-03 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
The prompt just cried out for snuggles, that and it was about time for Connor and Abby.