knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2015-03-15 04:55 pm
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Drabble: The Last Hunt

Title: The Last Hunt
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Creature
Rating: 18
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 410: Extinction Event. Also for my Primeval Bingo Card (round 6): World Ends in First Paragraph (4/25). Thanks go to Fred for casting her eyes over it for me.
Warning: Creature death, technically, lots of creature death.


A blinding flash of light had the raptor pause in his hunting and he turned towards the thunderous roar. He blinked uncomprehending at the blood red sky and settled feathers the hot wind had ruffled before turning back to seeking the prey his mate needed.

The scent of fire on the wind had him hesitate for an instant, wavering between protecting his nest or fleeing the blaze.

Fire leapt and he turned and fled on swift feet, seeking to outrun the flames. The hot air seared his lungs and he fell, gasping for breath as blood bubbled from his mouth.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] armed stephen and abby)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2015-03-16 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, meep!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, I blame the prompt ;)

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
*cries*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
*passes the tissues over* Sorry, the muse demanded this.

Thanks for reading.
goldarrow: (Default)

[personal profile] goldarrow 2015-03-16 05:45 am (UTC)(link)
Waaaah.
Poor fellow!
*sniffles*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I know, I was very mean to him.
*passes tissues over*

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 08:41 am (UTC)(link)

Eeek meep... but sadly that's what happened to the poor things

Pour on the angst!!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, I didn't want to do it but it did happen to the poor things.

Had to be angst for this prompt.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
*weeps*
There was nowhere to run, poor thing!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
*passes tissues*

Nowhere at all, poor thing.

Thanks for reading.
clea2011: (Jesssmile)

[personal profile] clea2011 2015-03-17 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, poor creature! But good use of the prompt!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-18 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* I was mean to the poor little thing.

Thanks.
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2015-03-19 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Eek, poor raptor!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-19 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* I felt bad being so mean to the poor thing.

Thanks for reading/looking at it for me.

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2015-03-20 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Very visceral descriptions. Poor raptor.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-20 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, but it had to be.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2015-03-21 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Very vivid!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-03-21 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to know it worked and thanks for reading.

[identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com 2015-04-01 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)

Poor creature. Lovely use of the prompt.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2015-04-02 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I know, I was terribly mean to the poor creature.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.