Primeval drabble: Stolen Future
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knitekatTitle: Stolen Future
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Original character.
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 407: Stolen. For my Bingo Card (round 6) prompt: Original Characters (1/25). Thanks go to Fred for casting her eyes over it.
She knew. The knock on the door in the middle of the day. The suited man with a serious expression, the sorrow in his eyes. She wanted to slam the door, to deny what he would tell her.
She knew the name, Ed had spoken of him, not kindly but...
She sobbed as he spoke. His words no comfort, how could they be? Ed was gone and no words could bring him back to her. Her life was over, her future stolen from her and this man spoke of courage and bravery and of lives saved.
She wanted to scream.
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Original character.
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 407: Stolen. For my Bingo Card (round 6) prompt: Original Characters (1/25). Thanks go to Fred for casting her eyes over it.
She knew. The knock on the door in the middle of the day. The suited man with a serious expression, the sorrow in his eyes. She wanted to slam the door, to deny what he would tell her.
She knew the name, Ed had spoken of him, not kindly but...
She sobbed as he spoke. His words no comfort, how could they be? Ed was gone and no words could bring him back to her. Her life was over, her future stolen from her and this man spoke of courage and bravery and of lives saved.
She wanted to scream.
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Date: 2015-02-22 11:49 pm (UTC)Very sad and well done.
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Date: 2015-02-23 07:42 pm (UTC)Good to know it worked and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2015-02-22 11:57 pm (UTC)Well done.
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Date: 2015-02-23 07:44 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2015-02-23 02:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-02-23 07:46 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2015-02-23 07:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-02-23 08:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-02-23 08:25 pm (UTC)Good use of the prompt.
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Date: 2015-02-23 08:26 pm (UTC)Thanks.
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Date: 2015-02-24 08:03 am (UTC)Meep - lots o' angst! Great look into her anguish and also the mention of 'not kindly' about the messenger
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Date: 2015-02-24 08:44 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2015-02-28 10:29 pm (UTC)Nicely done. We don't see enough of the fallout from the ARC's business.
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Date: 2015-03-01 08:17 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2015-03-04 03:56 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-03-04 09:11 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2015-03-08 05:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-03-08 05:43 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading and for looking it over for me.
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Date: 2019-07-06 05:44 am (UTC)A fear that every soldier's partner lives with.
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Date: 2019-07-07 12:37 pm (UTC)It must be, that and knowing what it means when someone turns up at the door.
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Date: 2019-07-06 08:47 pm (UTC)Very moving drabble. Loved the last line, perfect way to end it.
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Date: 2019-07-07 12:40 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it and sorry for the sad.
Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2019-07-21 06:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2019-07-21 06:41 pm (UTC)