Primeval drabble: A Cure For Boredom
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knitekatTitle: A Cure For Boredom
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Stephen Hart/James Lester
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 Challenge 333 Past Prompts and 40 Dialogue.
“Haven't you finished yet?”
“No more than when you last asked me.”
“I'm bored.”
“What do you expect me to do about it?”
“I can think of something...”
“I'm sure you can.”
“Well?”
“If you hadn't noticed, we're at work.”
“And?”
“Some of us have standards.”
“Are you saying I don't?”
“...”
“Ah, my reputation for shagging any place, any time. You've never complained about it before.”
“Why would I want to complain about it?”
“But you won't shag me now.”
“Don't pout.”
“Come on, James. I'll make it worth your while. Please...”
“You're incorrigible, Stephen.”
“Please.”
“Fine, I'm listening.”
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Stephen Hart/James Lester
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 Challenge 333 Past Prompts and 40 Dialogue.
“Haven't you finished yet?”
“No more than when you last asked me.”
“I'm bored.”
“What do you expect me to do about it?”
“I can think of something...”
“I'm sure you can.”
“Well?”
“If you hadn't noticed, we're at work.”
“And?”
“Some of us have standards.”
“Are you saying I don't?”
“...”
“Ah, my reputation for shagging any place, any time. You've never complained about it before.”
“Why would I want to complain about it?”
“But you won't shag me now.”
“Don't pout.”
“Come on, James. I'll make it worth your while. Please...”
“You're incorrigible, Stephen.”
“Please.”
“Fine, I'm listening.”
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Date: 2013-09-21 10:40 pm (UTC)I do like the way this is totally dialogue. It creates the illusion of far more than 100 words because of the numerous line breaks, and it works very well as a drabble.
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Date: 2013-09-22 02:44 pm (UTC)and something useful came out of the course ;)Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2013-09-22 10:57 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-09-22 02:45 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2013-09-22 07:02 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-09-22 07:29 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2013-09-23 07:09 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-09-23 07:12 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2013-09-28 04:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-09-28 05:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-09-29 07:05 pm (UTC)Great drabble.
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Date: 2013-09-29 07:45 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2013-09-29 10:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-09-30 07:35 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2013-10-01 01:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-01 07:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-03 10:48 am (UTC)Hee! I like the effect of just dialogue without tags. It gives a very complete scene - and makes 100 words go much further than usual.
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Date: 2013-10-03 06:42 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2013-10-06 02:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-06 08:50 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.