Primeval drabble: Lost (Denial weekend prompt)

[knitekat]

Title: Lost
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Hilary Becker, Connor Temple
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the Denial weekend prompts 'missing limb' and/or 'volcano'. Not my fault ;)


Becker swore when the mountain behind them blew its top, lava spewing down its slopes as large boulders pummelled the ground. Fuck! So much for Connor's safe era.

“Becker!” Connor yelled as he ran over, waving at the volcano as if Becker hadn't noticed it.

Becker didn't waste time in discussion, he just grabbed Connor and raced for the anomaly. An anomaly which was rapidly fading. He sped up and dragged Connor with him, both men diving through the anomaly just as it closed.

The only sign they'd been there was one cleanly severed lower leg, quickly covered by lava.

Comments

[goldarrow]

Ooh,nice one!
Love the ambiguous ending, quite evil!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

Well, I couldn't decide who to be nasty to ;) *evil laughter*

[bigtitch.livejournal.com]

Eep, eep and triple-eep!!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Sorry, but my prompt was 'missing limb'

Thanks for reading, even with the eeping.

[fififolle]

Holy crap!!! That was brilliant. I wonder if the anomaly cauterises the amputation? I bloody hope so. Would love a follow up fic, but I can imagine all the lovely angsty h/c myself, too :)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

I blame the prompt ;) *bows* I seem to recall a lack of blood when the raptor was beheaded (bowling alley ep). Who knows - although I couldn't decide who lost the leg ;)

Thanks for reading.

[fififolle]

Too much blood would have put it past the watershed... We'll say it cauterises as it chops! Yay!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

True. *nods* Cauterising as it chops is far neater.

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppp!!!!!!! *flails* Eeek!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Sorry ;) Flails? LMMAK indeed.

Thanks for reading.

[fredbassett]

You chopped someone's leg off!!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Technically speaking, the anomaly did ;)

Thanks for reading.

[ericadawn16.livejournal.com]

Eww

lol

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Sorry.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[mysteriousaliwz.livejournal.com]

Eek!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Sorry, the prompt made me do it ;)

Thanks for reading.

[anniespinkhouse.livejournal.com]

Oh, that's cruel. It's certainly got my mind working on the possibilities.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Sorry, but I blame the prompt (that is my story and I'm sticking to it *g*). Have fun with the possibilities ;)

Thanks for reading.

[joereaves.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwww.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

I'm sure they'll be mostly OK.

Thanks for reading.

[cordeliadelayne]

Eeek, oh my!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Sorry, I was mean to someone. but I still blame the prompt

Thanks for reading.

[aunteeneenah.livejournal.com]

That last sentence...oooo...nasty. Wonder which one. Poor lads.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

I know, I blame the prompt ;) Er... I didn't decide and I think the poor lad in question is probably happier that way.

Thanks for reading.

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

I love Connor pointing at the volcano like that *G*

Oh dear... now Sinister and Dexter have a new playmate in Sanctuary!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

It just seemed a Connor-ish thing to do.

*nods* That they do, if a random leg arrives to play football we know where if came from ;)

Thanks for reading.

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

Whoops! ;-)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

I'm sure one of the boys is going ouch and the other whoops ;)

Thanks for reading.

[clea2011]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKK!!!!

Becker!! Connor!!! Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!!

Excellent drabble, but MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

But the prompt made me do it ;) The boys are fine... well, mostly fine... one of them, in fact, is totally fine. Sorry.

Thanks for reading.