knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
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Title: Lost
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Hilary Becker, Connor Temple
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the Denial weekend prompts 'missing limb' and/or 'volcano'. Not my fault ;)


Becker swore when the mountain behind them blew its top, lava spewing down its slopes as large boulders pummelled the ground. Fuck! So much for Connor's safe era.

“Becker!” Connor yelled as he ran over, waving at the volcano as if Becker hadn't noticed it.

Becker didn't waste time in discussion, he just grabbed Connor and raced for the anomaly. An anomaly which was rapidly fading. He sped up and dragged Connor with him, both men diving through the anomaly just as it closed.

The only sign they'd been there was one cleanly severed lower leg, quickly covered by lava.

Date: 2013-09-14 02:57 pm (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
Ooh,nice one!
Love the ambiguous ending, quite evil!

Date: 2013-09-14 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, glad you liked it.

Well, I couldn't decide who to be nasty to ;) *evil laughter*

Date: 2013-09-14 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com
Eep, eep and triple-eep!!

Date: 2013-09-14 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Sorry, but my prompt was 'missing limb'

Thanks for reading, even with the eeping.

Date: 2013-09-14 03:30 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (OMG!! cat)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Holy crap!!! That was brilliant. I wonder if the anomaly cauterises the amputation? I bloody hope so. Would love a follow up fic, but I can imagine all the lovely angsty h/c myself, too :)

Date: 2013-09-14 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
I blame the prompt ;) *bows* I seem to recall a lack of blood when the raptor was beheaded (bowling alley ep). Who knows - although I couldn't decide who lost the leg ;)

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-16 07:34 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - Becker blood)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Too much blood would have put it past the watershed... We'll say it cauterises as it chops! Yay!

Date: 2013-09-16 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
True. *nods* Cauterising as it chops is far neater.

Date: 2013-09-14 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppp!!!!!!! *flails* Eeek!

Date: 2013-09-14 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Sorry ;) Flails? LMMAK indeed.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-14 04:11 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
You chopped someone's leg off!!

Date: 2013-09-14 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Technically speaking, the anomaly did ;)

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-14 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Sorry.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-14 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Sorry, the prompt made me do it ;)

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-14 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anniespinkhouse.livejournal.com
Oh, that's cruel. It's certainly got my mind working on the possibilities.

Date: 2013-09-14 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Sorry, but I blame the prompt (that is my story and I'm sticking to it *g*). Have fun with the possibilities ;)

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-14 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joereaves.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwww.

Date: 2013-09-14 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
I'm sure they'll be mostly OK.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-14 08:43 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby maitland)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Eeek, oh my!

Date: 2013-09-14 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Sorry, I was mean to someone. but I still blame the prompt

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-15 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunteeneenah.livejournal.com
That last sentence...oooo...nasty. Wonder which one. Poor lads.

Date: 2013-09-15 10:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
I know, I blame the prompt ;) Er... I didn't decide and I think the poor lad in question is probably happier that way.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-15 08:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

I love Connor pointing at the volcano like that *G*

Oh dear... now Sinister and Dexter have a new playmate in Sanctuary!

Date: 2013-09-15 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
It just seemed a Connor-ish thing to do.

*nods* That they do, if a random leg arrives to play football we know where if came from ;)

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-15 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Whoops! ;-)

Date: 2013-09-16 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
I'm sure one of the boys is going ouch and the other whoops ;)

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-21 10:13 pm (UTC)
clea2011: (BeckerConnor)
From: [personal profile] clea2011
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKK!!!!

Becker!! Connor!!! Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!!

Excellent drabble, but MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!!

Date: 2013-09-22 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
But the prompt made me do it ;) The boys are fine... well, mostly fine... one of them, in fact, is totally fine. Sorry.

Thanks for reading.

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