knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
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Title: Just Didn't Understand
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Clone
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 330: "It's all Greek to me". Part 19 of my Strange Bedfellows drabble series and follows Opening Move. Thanks go to Fred for looking this over for me, cheers.


He didn't understand why they had carried them here, but She had ordered it and so he had obeyed.

It didn't make sense that they were told to put one in a bed and care for his wounds while they chained the other in the Dark Room. A shiver ran down his back as he thought of that place of fear and pain

He watched the man She had spoken to as some distant memory stirred, of Her ordering them about, of the one-like them-but-not-like-them holding a gun to the man's head.

He just didn't understand.

Maybe he should ask.

Date: 2013-09-01 04:48 pm (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
Oooh, intriguing!
Great take on a clone awakening to his individuality. Hopefully he won't ask Helen, though!

Date: 2013-09-02 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Good to know it worked.
Hopefully the poor clone will pick someone other than Helen to ask.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-01 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
*shudders* Poor clone.

Date: 2013-09-02 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Oops ;) Hopefully not poor clone.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-01 08:13 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Being Human - tom's eyelashes)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
That's brilliant. I want to help him too! The Dark Room sounds scary.

Date: 2013-09-02 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*blushes* The clone? He could do with some help. *nods* the clone (and probably Lyle) did not enjoy The Dark Room.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-01 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
Scary and very intriguing!

Date: 2013-09-02 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Good to hear, I was meeping over this prompt, so good to know it worked.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-01 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Very eerie. Nice job of showing events from the clone's POV.

Date: 2013-09-02 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Good ;) The clone was perfect for this prompt, poor confused clone ;)

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-02 08:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Oooh, very nice to have the POV of the clone and his confusion!

Eeeek, Jon!!

Date: 2013-09-02 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, the poor confused clone was perfect for the prompt.

Date: 2013-09-02 01:59 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (PriWriMo - Helen)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
That's intriguing and definitely rather sad. I don't see a clone with growing self-awareness doing well at Helen's hands.

No, we ahevn't got a generic clone tag. Just use OC, I think.

Date: 2013-09-02 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Hee, now to see where the next prompt takes it ;) No, the clone had better be careful around Helen.

Thanks for looking at it and for reading.

Cheers, tag added.

Date: 2013-09-04 02:20 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] anomalies)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Aw, poor thing.

I think just using the OC tag at p100 will be okay :)

Date: 2013-09-04 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*nods* The poor thing is confused, hopefully he'll ask the right person.

Thanks for reading and for the tag info.

Date: 2013-09-07 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Ooh! Interesting take on the prompt.

Date: 2013-09-07 02:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Good to know it worked, the prompt stumped me for a while.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-08 12:03 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-09-08 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*nods* Poor confused clone, but I'm sure he will be OK well, maybe ;)

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2013-09-18 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com

Very intriguing. It looks like Helen has a definite plan.

Date: 2013-09-18 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Good to know it worked. *nods* Helen definitely does, she just hasn't told me what it is ;)

Thanks for reading.

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