knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
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Title: Just Didn't Understand
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Clone
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 330: "It's all Greek to me". Part 19 of my Strange Bedfellows drabble series and follows Opening Move. Thanks go to Fred for looking this over for me, cheers.


He didn't understand why they had carried them here, but She had ordered it and so he had obeyed.

It didn't make sense that they were told to put one in a bed and care for his wounds while they chained the other in the Dark Room. A shiver ran down his back as he thought of that place of fear and pain

He watched the man She had spoken to as some distant memory stirred, of Her ordering them about, of the one-like them-but-not-like-them holding a gun to the man's head.

He just didn't understand.

Maybe he should ask.

Date: 2013-09-01 04:48 pm (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
Oooh, intriguing!
Great take on a clone awakening to his individuality. Hopefully he won't ask Helen, though!

Date: 2013-09-01 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
*shudders* Poor clone.

Date: 2013-09-01 08:13 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Being Human - tom's eyelashes)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
That's brilliant. I want to help him too! The Dark Room sounds scary.

Date: 2013-09-01 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
Scary and very intriguing!

Date: 2013-09-01 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Very eerie. Nice job of showing events from the clone's POV.

Date: 2013-09-02 08:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Oooh, very nice to have the POV of the clone and his confusion!

Eeeek, Jon!!

Date: 2013-09-02 01:59 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (PriWriMo - Helen)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
That's intriguing and definitely rather sad. I don't see a clone with growing self-awareness doing well at Helen's hands.

No, we ahevn't got a generic clone tag. Just use OC, I think.

Date: 2013-09-04 02:20 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] anomalies)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Aw, poor thing.

I think just using the OC tag at p100 will be okay :)

Date: 2013-09-07 01:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Ooh! Interesting take on the prompt.

Date: 2013-09-18 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com

Very intriguing. It looks like Helen has a definite plan.

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