knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2013-03-20 10:50 pm
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Primeval drabble: Not Quite To Plan

Title: Not Quite To Plan
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 307: Asylum. Part of my Making An Impression drabble series and continues from Once More Unto The Breach. Thanks go to Fred for looking it over for me.


James smiled when the creature lowered its head and slowly paced towards him, salivating, fangs bared. Now, to lead it away from Connor...

Shit! The creature's head swung around at the furious hammering on the door before it sniffed at the blood trail that led to Connor. Its nose bumped against the firmly barred door, once and then again, harder.

He'd hoped the room would be a refuge for his... Connor and the others; but he doubted the door would hold against a determined attack, not the way the creature was rattling it.

James yelled, waved his arms and ran.
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[identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com 2013-03-20 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
*runs screaming after James*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
That is a very apt icon ;)

*are you sure that is wise?* ;)

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] aunteeneenah.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Run! James, Run! Very exciting!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't worry, James is running.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[identity profile] flaccidduck.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
EXCITEMENT PLUS!!!!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I think you might be excited ;)

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I think that comment is going through several minds. It isn't turning out quite as James planned.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
Oh dear.......

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* Things are not looking that good.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] bigtitch.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 05:57 am (UTC)(link)
Nooo! Be careful Lester!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, but Lester decided to distract the creature. I'm sure he'll be careful.

Thanks for reading.
fififolle: (Primeval - Connor *faints*)

[personal profile] fififolle 2013-03-21 08:26 am (UTC)(link)
Crazy man!!!
Exciting drabble :)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
James objects to being called crazy ;) He's just trying to save his Connor.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

I assume that is Connor fainting again at the news of what James has been up to ;)

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Eek! *reads drabble through fingers*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry ;) Hopefully the next prompt won't require you to read through your fingers.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Agh! Very intense.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry. Good to know it worked.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, noes! Please, run faster, Lester!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, James is just doing what he thinks best.

*nods* James is running, but he doesn't want to risk losing the creature.

Thanks for reading.
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2013-03-21 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeep!!!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-21 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Definitely eep! Although everyone is hoping not too eep ;)

Thanks for looking at it and for reading.
clea2011: (Lester black white)

[personal profile] clea2011 2013-03-21 11:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeek! Very exciting! Run Lester! :)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-22 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Eek could be right and James was hoping his plan would be less exciting. Don't worry, Lester is running.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] 47eleven.livejournal.com 2013-03-22 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
Great drabble!!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-22 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, glad you liked it.

[identity profile] judithjohn.livejournal.com 2013-03-22 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
This is intense!!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-22 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to know it worked and thanks for reading.

[identity profile] natchris.livejournal.com 2013-03-23 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
*shrieks and looks around for a weapon*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-23 04:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry. James is probably doing likewise ;)

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2013-03-24 08:57 am (UTC)(link)

You do like to put us and James through the wringer, don't you? (And even the creature, blocked from his intended prey...)

I like the 'for his...' bit too

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-24 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I blame the prompts ;) You want the creature to eat Connor? And you call me mean *g*

Poor James isn't quite sure where he stands with Connor, but he does hope that Connor is still his.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2013-03-24 10:55 am (UTC)(link)
Oh Lester!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-24 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, but he's not about to let the creature in with Connor.

Thanks for reading.
celeste9: (primeval: lester)

[personal profile] celeste9 2013-03-24 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no! This could be very, very bad! Run!!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-24 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry. James knows that, but he also thinks it is better than letting the creature in with Connor. Don't worry, he's running.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-26 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry ;) I'm sure that James will be fine at least, more or less ;)

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com 2013-03-26 10:31 pm (UTC)(link)

Go Lester! Big damn hero! Hope he can run fast...

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-27 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Lester ftw! He hopes he can run fast enough.

Thanks for reading.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby maitland)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2013-03-26 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Eek!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-27 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Lester is hoping it isn't going to be eek!

Thanks for reading.

[personal profile] samueljames 2014-03-03 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Would cross my fingers for him but I can't do that and type.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2014-03-03 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
That would be a bit difficult, try crossing your toes ;)

Thanks for reading.
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