Primeval drabble: Determined To Make Things Right

[knitekat]

Title: Determined To Make Things Right
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Stephen Hart, (Tom Ryan)
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 300: Picture Prompt (anomaly). Mentions character death. Thanks go to Fred for looking it over for me.


Stephen stared at the anomaly and sighed. He'd known from the start they'd be trouble, but seeing extinct animals and witnessing the past had been irresistible.

He'd been unimpressed by the thought of the military being involved, shooting first rather than listening to reason. Of course, that was before he'd met the bloody fit Captain Tom Ryan.

Shared experiences and dangers first led to friendship, quickly followed by snogging and some of the best sex Stephen had ever had.

But Ryan had died in the past.

Helen claimed she'd changed the past, now Stephen would try.

He needed Ryan back.

Comments

[eriah211.livejournal.com]

Poor Stephen! It's already sad that he has lost Ryan, but changing the past? That won't end well.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Definitely poor Stephen. This isn't set long after Helen telling Nick about her and Stephen, so the poor boy is suffering. But it probably won't end well.

Thanks for reading.

[clea2011]

Aww, poor Stephen, changing the past probably isn't a good idea, but can't blame him for wanting Ryan back.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Changing the past isn't, but Stephen's lost too much not to try.

Thanks for reading.

[freddiejoey.livejournal.com]

I think we can all sympathise with Stephen here

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, poor Stephen's not having a good time at the moment.

Thanks for reading.

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Uh oh.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Stephen hopes not ;)

Thanks for reading.

[goldarrow]

Bad idea; but Stephen always did lead with his heart...

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Potentially, but Stephen just wants Ryan back.

Thanks for reading.

[judithjohn.livejournal.com]

Very poignant

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good to know it works and thanks for reading.

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

Well, it could lead to a change for the better - no Season 2 and its awful ending would be a great bonus for a start!

Great look at Stephen

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* It definitely could. Ryan would be there for Stephen and he'd never believe Helen.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Meep! Yes, please, change the past, Stephen!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Sorry, Stephen only wants his Ryan back, one little change ;)

Thanks for reading.

[shadowcat]

*hugs Stephen* Oh, Stephen, playing with timelines is never of the good.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Poor Stephen just wants Ryan back, he's not thinking of the trouble it might cause.

Thanks for reading.

[dreamer-98.livejournal.com]

Great look at Stephen. I hope he is able to reunite with Ryan (and not in the afterlife).

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it. Stephen would prefer to reunite with Ryan out of the afterlife.

Thanks for reading.

[stealingpennies.livejournal.com]

Poor Stephen. It's amazing how much a full story you can get in 100 words.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* I'm being mean to Stephen (and Ryan) now.

Thanks for the kind comment and for reading.

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

Meep, poor Stephen! I'll cross my fingers for him!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Stephen hasn't given up on Ryan yet and appreciates the support.

Thanks for reading.

[flaccidduck.livejournal.com]

*hugs Stephen*

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Stephen needs - and appreciates - the hugs.

Thanks for reading.

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

Ooh yes! Cool idea!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Stephen needs his Ryan and then S2 would have ended differently too

Thanks for reading.

[fredbassett]

Go for it, Stephen!!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Stephen is, he wants Ryan back.

Thanks for reading.

[fififolle]

Ooh! Yes please *g*
Nice one.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

I thought it might be a popular idea Stephen had ;)

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

Eek! Stephen should know better than to go messing around with changing time!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* Stephen does, but he's just lost everything.

Thanks for reading.

[celeste9]

Aw, poor Stephen. That doesn't seem like a terribly bright idea, but who could blame him for wanting to try?

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Definitely can't blame him, poor Stephen's just lost everything.

Thanks for reading.

[cordeliadelayne]

Aw, poor Stephen.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* It is a bad time for him - he's lost his lover, his best friend and everything.

Thanks for reading.