Primeval drabble: Unwelcome Guest?

[knitekat]

Title: Unwelcome Guest?
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Connor Temple, Abby Maitland, Unnamed Character.
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 296: Leftovers. Part of my Making An Impression drabble series and follows Things To Be Grateful For. Thanks go to Fred for looking at this for me.


Connor sighed. Just perfect, Jack had arrived. No, that was uncharitable. Abby should spend time with her family, not just trying to cheer him up.

Abby's cry of “You bastard” followed by a resounding slap had Connor dashing to her side to see what Jack-the-idiot had done now. He froze in disbelief when he found Abby glaring at a stunned and obviously just slapped James.

At his gasp, Abby stepped back and looked between them. “I'll leave you to talk. James, if you're hungry we've lots of leftovers.” She shot him a very pointed look. “Certain people weren't very hungry.”

Comments

[freddiejoey.livejournal.com]

I can feel that slap!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

James still can ;)

Thanks for reading.

[aunteeneenah.livejournal.com]

I had to go back and re-read the last one so I could understand this one! lol Okay, now i'm ready to comment. Good on ya, Abby! James deserved to be slapped for putting Connor through this. I know, his reasoning was good but he needed to let Connor make the choice! Love this.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Oops, sorry about any confusion.

*nods* Abby is not happy with James right now ;) Not that James is happy being slapped.

Thanks for reading.

[joshinator.livejournal.com]

Very vivid :)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[clea2011]

Ooh good one - I can just see Abby being angry about Connor's distress.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it. *nods* Abby's seen the effect James' absence has had on Connor, and she's not happy.

Thanks for reading.

[natchris.livejournal.com]

Great!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[fififolle]

It's James!! That's brilliant!!! And what a fabulous use of the prompt!!! *huggles Connor*

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* It is James. Hee, glad you liked it although James didn't appreciate being slapped. *blushes* Glad you liked it and Connor needs to be huggled.

Lovely icon and thanks for reading.

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

Well, whatever Abby didn't manage to castrate, Connor can yell at or hug or both ;)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

James is edging away from Abby, Connor is looking rather worried and wondering if he needs to check things ;)

Thanks for reading.

[47eleven.livejournal.com]

fabulous use of the prompt

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked the drabble.

[eriah211.livejournal.com]

Ugh, Jack. No, wait! Yayyyyy, James! *flails happily*
I kind of think he deserved the slap though ^_^

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Hee, would I be that mean to Connor ;) *nods* It had to be James.
Jsmes doesn't think he deserved the slap however once he hears how upset Connor was, he might change his mind, maybe ;)

Thanks for reading.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Oh, Abby! But understandable.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* James is not Abby's favourite person right now.

Thanks for reading.

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

The slap was possibly slightly deserved, but still - yay! \o/

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

James disagrees ;) I'm sure Connor will be happy to see him though.

Thanks for reading.

[fredbassett]

Someone's in trouble!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* James is again

Thanks again for looking at it and for reading.

[dreamer-98.livejournal.com]

Ouch! I don't blame Abby for being angry.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

James agrees it hurt *nods* No, Abby is not happy with James for what he did to Connor.

Thanks for reading.

[cordeliadelayne]

Ouch!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* James says the slap hurt.

Thanks for reading.

[talliw.livejournal.com]

Ouch. I bet Abby throws a good right hook.:)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

James says it hurt and that Abby is not someone to annoy.

Thanks for reading.

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

Eeeeeee!!!! It's Lester!!!! *dances* And he deserved that slap as well - I love protective!Abby!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*watches the excited therapod* Yes, Lester's back. He says he didn't deserve the slap. Protective Abby ftw!

Thanks for reading.

[celeste9]

JAMES! And Abby slapped him! He might have deserved it a little bit, but still, poor James. Abby's reaction is just so very Abby.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* James is back. Hee, Abby had to slap him, although James certainly didn't like it. Glad you liked Abby.

Thanks for reading.

[samueljames]

Ooh, protective Abby. I'm sure James wasn't expecting that welcome.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* James forgot how protective Abby can be.

Thanks for reading.