Primeval drabble: The Day Just Got Worse
Oct. 12th, 2012 04:05 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
knitekatTitle: The Day Just Got Worse
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester, Dave, (OWC)
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 284: Future Predator. Part of my Dreams Of Yesterday drabble series and continues from No Need For Advertisement. Thanks go to Fred for the beta, cheers m'dear.
James' heart thumped hard in his chest when the vegetation parted to reveal the grey, hairless head of a future predator. He held his breath as it sniffed the air and clicked loudly as its head moved from side to side before it seemed to zero in on him and his rapidly-beating heart.
James watched mesmerized as drool dripped from teeth that appeared far too sharp for his peace of mind.
Oh fuck! The last time he'd encountered one, he'd only survived with the help of Monty and, unfortunately for him, he didn't have his mammoth with him this time.
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester, Dave, (OWC)
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 284: Future Predator. Part of my Dreams Of Yesterday drabble series and continues from No Need For Advertisement. Thanks go to Fred for the beta, cheers m'dear.
James' heart thumped hard in his chest when the vegetation parted to reveal the grey, hairless head of a future predator. He held his breath as it sniffed the air and clicked loudly as its head moved from side to side before it seemed to zero in on him and his rapidly-beating heart.
James watched mesmerized as drool dripped from teeth that appeared far too sharp for his peace of mind.
Oh fuck! The last time he'd encountered one, he'd only survived with the help of Monty and, unfortunately for him, he didn't have his mammoth with him this time.
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Date: 2012-10-12 03:06 pm (UTC)*crosses fingers for James*
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Date: 2012-10-12 08:33 pm (UTC)*James says thanks and his own fingers are also firmly crossed that the next prompt is better*
Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-12 04:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-12 08:37 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-12 07:43 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-12 08:38 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading, even if it is too tense ;)
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Date: 2012-10-12 08:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-12 09:07 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading, even with the eek!
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Date: 2012-10-12 09:47 pm (UTC)Eeek for Lester and the cub! Next weeks prompt needs to be kinder to them!
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Date: 2012-10-13 04:19 pm (UTC)and he's glaring at LMMAK about it ;)Both Lester and the cub say eek is the correct response and that they hope next week's prompt rescues them ;)
Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-13 12:09 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-13 04:22 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-13 12:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-13 04:24 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-13 02:39 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-13 04:26 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-13 06:18 am (UTC)really vivid!
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Date: 2012-10-13 04:28 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-13 06:58 am (UTC)Oh fuck is the only appropriate reaction
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Date: 2012-10-13 04:29 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-13 12:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-13 04:30 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-13 11:06 pm (UTC)I think I will have to bribe the P100 mods in regard to the next prompt. Let's hope this is Dave, just wanting to be friends!
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Date: 2012-10-14 03:57 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-10-14 03:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-14 03:58 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading, even with the eek!
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Date: 2012-10-14 05:37 pm (UTC)*sidles away looking shifty about the prompt*
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Date: 2012-10-14 07:22 pm (UTC)*eyes LMMAK looking shifty and sidling away* Well you might, James is not happy with you ;)
Thanks for reading
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Date: 2012-10-25 09:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-10-26 07:23 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.