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Title: Independence

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 100

Characters: Helen Cutter

Rating: 12

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

A/N: For the P100 Challenge 123: Freedom. Thanks Fred for the beta.



Helen just didn't understand Nick. How could he have refused to travel with her.

He had obviously changed over the years. The old Nick would never have helped capture her.

Well, she wasn't just meekly going to submit.

If Lester thought she'd just do what he wanted ...

Oh, she would talk to Nick.

She would even pretend to help.

And then she would leave them standing.

No one was going to take her freedom from her.

She'd managed to survive in the past and future for years.

And no way was Helen about to give that freedom up now.

Date: 2009-09-13 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a1cmustangpilot.livejournal.com
Ohhh you go Helen! Don't let them keep you where you don't want to be kept! Excellent and wonderful for me to read right now. Thank you! I always look forward to your drabbles and stories.
~

Date: 2009-09-13 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks. Glad you liked it and hope you continue to look forward to them.

Date: 2009-09-13 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

////And then she would leave them standing.////

Very good look at Helen's thoughts at that point.

Date: 2009-09-13 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks. Good to know I got her right.

Date: 2009-09-13 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com
This drabble is so Helen! Very nice!

Date: 2009-09-13 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks. Nice to know I got Helen right.

Date: 2009-09-13 09:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
This is totally Helen -- excellent drabble!

Date: 2009-09-13 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks. I never sure if I get Helen right.

Date: 2009-09-13 10:46 am (UTC)
ext_27141: (Helen)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Nice :) Helen's a conniving little so-and-so, isn't she?

Date: 2009-09-13 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
That she is, but she really doesn't want to be there.

Date: 2009-09-13 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bella-farfalla.livejournal.com
Helen's so badass, I love her. hehe :D A brilliant look inside her head.

Date: 2009-09-13 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks. Glad I got Helen OK.

Date: 2009-09-13 11:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com
Yes, keep your freedom, Helen. Why return to this world when you can travel through time.

Date: 2009-09-13 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Yep, that is precisely how Helen feels.

Date: 2009-09-13 12:38 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
Very Helen!! Great drabble :)

Date: 2009-09-13 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks and thanks for the beta. Happy you thought it worked.

Date: 2009-09-13 08:48 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (snake-handler abby)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Really good look at Helen.

Date: 2009-09-13 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks. Glad you thought it worked.

Date: 2010-03-12 06:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tia198.livejournal.com
Brilliant insight into Helen's personality, you captured her really well!

Date: 2010-03-13 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thank you, I wasn't sure I could write Helen so this was a little experiment to see if I could.

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