knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2011-09-24 09:44 pm

Primeval drabble: Counting Days

Title: Counting Days
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester, Abby Maitland
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 229: Backwards. Part of my Dreams Of Yesterday drabble series and set before Nature Or Nurture. Thanks to Fred for looking at it for me.


Abby flinched when James threw something to the ground and stomped off into the forest. She quickly trailed after him. The area wasn't safe for someone not paying attention to his surroundings.

James stopped after a short distance and turned to glare at her. “Leave me alone unless you can get me home.” With that, he walked back to their camp and ignored her.

Abby sighed as she noticed the notched wood James had discarded so violently earlier. She didn't need to count to know there were 56 marks, one for each day they had been stuck in the past.

[personal profile] samueljames 2011-09-24 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor James. It's got to be tough though so staying positive all the time couldn't be easy. Hopefully he's not stomped off into harms way.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:10 pm (UTC)(link)
James is not having a good time. No, he should be safe - he stomped back to their camp. Thanks for reading.

[personal profile] samueljames 2011-09-25 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
That'll teach me to read properly. Sorry I missed that line.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
No problem, and the camp not necessarily totally safe ;)

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2011-09-24 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't blame Lester for feeling racked off! I like Abby making sure he's safe.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
He's not the outdoors type ;) Glad you liked Abby looking after him, I think she's made it her role in these drabbles ;)

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2011-09-24 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, poor kids. :(

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sure they will be fine. Thanks for reading.
fififolle: (Primeval - Nick sands of time)

[personal profile] fififolle 2011-09-25 08:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oh dear. Poor things :(
Loved the emotion of this!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
James had to lose it at some point.

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 10:10 am (UTC)(link)
Tsk, tsk, Lester. Taking your anger out on Abby won't help the situation. It's not her fault you are stranded.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* Lester does know that, really. I think this is just a bad day for him. Thanks for reading.
ext_27141: (Abby)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 10:33 am (UTC)(link)
Really like this. Anyone would be affected like this by the situation they're stuck in - even James!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you did. No matter how hard James pretends he isn't 'human', he is. Thanks for reading.
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2011-09-25 11:10 am (UTC)(link)
Oh no, poor James!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* James isn't having a good day. Thanks for reading and for looking at it for me.

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor them!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I iz being mean to both of them now, but I'm sure they will be fine. Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
meep. Poor them.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* I haven't rescued them (yet), but I'm sure they will be fine. Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] prehistoriccat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
*meep* Poor James.

Can I just say how much I am loving this relationship you're developing with Abby & Lester, its a pleasure to read.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* I am still being mean to him.

Thanks, glad you liked their relationship, though they are writing themselves.

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2011-09-27 06:40 am (UTC)(link)

56... No wonder he's getting angsty! Poor loves.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-27 07:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* Being lost in the past is not in James' job description ;) But I'm sure they will be fine (probably). Thanks for reading.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby and cutter)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2011-09-28 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, poor James!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-09-28 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
He's not happy (and I'm still being mean to him). Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2011-10-01 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
56 days. It must be nerve wracking not knowing if and when rescue will come.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2011-10-02 02:06 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* James is certainly not happy about being in the past. Thanks for reading.