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Title: Doubts
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100 + 100
Characters: James Lester, Connor Temple
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 226: Sarah Page. Part of my Making An Impression drabble series and yes, its angsty again ;) Thanks to Fred for looking at it for me.


Connor just picked at his meal and as it was his favourite James felt he had the right to be concerned. What had Burton done now? “Connor? Interesting day?”

When Connor just grunted, James felt his concern increase several fold. “Connor?” He winced slightly as his tone, part worried and part demanding.

Connor finally looked up at him. “You never did say how Sarah died.”

James quirked an eyebrow, so that was Burton's game. The bloody bastard. “Burton?”

Connor nodded and looked down at his plate.

“He's trying to put doubts in your mind, love.” And James knew he'd succeeded.

***

Connor nodded, he might be rubbish at figuring people out, but he'd realised that. “I know, but I...”

“But it's bothering you?” James asked with a look that Connor interpreted as both understanding and annoyed.

“I know he's lying, James.” Connor quickly answered. He trusted James... so why did Burton sound so convincing. Connor sighed, shaking his head again. “I just... wondered.”

“How she died?”James sighed softly. “Burton's right. It is my fault.”

“No!” Connor couldn't believe that.

“He is.” James' voice was firm. “I should never have allowed her to go on that rescue mission. On any of them.”

Date: 2011-09-01 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Ooh, yes, definitely angsty! And grr at Burton!

Date: 2011-09-01 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
It had to be angsty as MAI is set S4 (or 5) and Burton had to stir. Thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-09-01 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] samueljames
Oh, poor boys but good angst.

Date: 2011-09-01 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm sure the boys will get through it. Glad you liked the angst and thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-09-01 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkhorse-99.livejournal.com
Burton's such a perfect bastard. Loved the angst.

Date: 2011-09-01 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
That's how he's writing himself ;) The angst is never far away. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-09-01 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com
MAN! You weren't kidding. Excellent use of the prompt. At least he knows somewhere in that brain of his that Burton is manipulating him. Poor boys. *huggles them*

EDIT: I thought I was going to have to poke you soon if you didn't post more from this series. :-) I'm glad you posted. *Puts pointy sticks back in the cupboard* :-P
Edited Date: 2011-09-01 10:15 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-09-01 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
It had to go angsty with the prompt. Connor does know not to trust Burton, but he can't help wonder... I'm sure the boys will sort themselves out. *joins the huggle*

*watched pointy stick carefully* I'm still aiming for 1(+) drabble a week in this and the other drabble series. *paws crossed that I managed it*

Date: 2011-09-01 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com
"I'm still aiming for 1(+) drabble a week in this and the other drabble series."

I think you've done fairly well so far. I'm just impatient. LOL
Edited Date: 2011-09-01 10:32 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-09-01 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks. Sorry, you'll have to be impatient, next prompt isn't until Tues ;) And then I need to think of something. *vbg*

Date: 2011-09-02 12:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com
Heehee! Just so long as you keep posting. I'll just be over here in the corner close to the cupboard with the pointy sticks. :-P

Date: 2011-09-02 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*meep* ;) The plan is to keep going for as long as possible (this one is post number 33). Invests in padlock for cupboard ;)

Date: 2011-09-02 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com
Careful! As I think it's the same cupboard that I'm hiding in with the chocolate waiting for Fred to start posting S&S. :-P DON'T LOCK ME IN!!!!!!

Date: 2011-09-02 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Hee. Don't worry, I'll make sure you're supplied with choc and let you out for S&S ;)

Date: 2011-09-03 10:36 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-09-01 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jooles34.livejournal.com
Oh eep and sniffle. Nicely done.

Date: 2011-09-01 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*passes tissue* Thanks and don't worry, the boys will be fine (probably).

Date: 2011-09-01 10:24 pm (UTC)
fredbassett: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
Great use of the prompts :)

I am still in awe about how you're continuing to fit them all in so organically.

Date: 2011-09-01 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks and thanks for looking at it for me.

This one I'm trying to keep linear (doy started off in the middle anyway). I had a meep moment with the prompt as this is set S4 or so, but I'm determined to continue for as long as possible (drabble post 33 and counting).

Date: 2011-09-02 12:02 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (sarah and james)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Poor boys!

Date: 2011-09-02 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*nods* I was mean to both of them. Thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-09-02 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auntypam.livejournal.com
*HugsConnor/Lester* *smacksBurtonupsidethe head* Great drabble! So much angst in so little words...

Date: 2011-09-02 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*joins in the hug* The boys need hugs and Burton definitely needs a smack. Thanks, glad you liked it. The angst bunny wanted to play ;)

Date: 2011-09-02 07:27 am (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - Burton Lester management)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Bah! Bloody Burton, sneaky bastard. let me at him!
Great drabbles.

Date: 2011-09-02 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Burton has to be the sneaky bastard. Go for it, Lester and Connor will cheer you on ;)
Thanks, glad you liked them.

Date: 2011-09-02 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com
Bloody bastard, indeed. I hope Burton won't succeed with his plans.

Date: 2011-09-02 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*nods* don't worry, the boys are on to him. Thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-09-02 06:58 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Connor Sprawl)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Angst alert! Damn that Burton, trying to prise Connor and Lester apart by using Sarah in that way!

Date: 2011-09-02 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
The angst bunny is always lurking ;) And Burton is always going to meddle and try to prise the boys apart. Bad!Burton. Thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-09-03 12:44 am (UTC)
celeste9: (primeval: lester)
From: [personal profile] celeste9
Oh, poor Lester! And Connor. That was very sneaky and rude of Burton.

Date: 2011-09-03 08:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
I was mean to both of them. *nods* Burton is up to something. Thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-09-03 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Poor Sarah. Poor Connor. Poor James. Trifecta of angst!

Great use of the prompt


Date: 2011-09-03 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*nods* I was mean to all of them. Thanks and glad you liked it.

Date: 2011-09-04 01:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Poor Lester. He would blame himself terribly.

Date: 2011-09-04 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Lester would, even if he couldn't have stopped it. Thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-09-04 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
meep, poor Connor and Lester. Don't let him get to you!

Date: 2011-09-05 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
I was mean to the boys again. I'm sure the boys will be fine. Thanks for reading.

Date: 2011-11-05 05:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
Poor boys, and poor Sarah *growls at Burton*

Date: 2011-11-05 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Sorry, I was mean to everyone. *joins in growling at Burton*

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