knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2015-05-03 08:43 pm
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Primeval drabble: A Siren Call

Title: A Siren Call
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Future Predator, (James Lester).
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 417: White Noise. Definition: a constant background noise; especially : one that drowns out other sounds. Thanks go to Fred for looking this over for me.


He snarled as his prey fled, snapping at the air as the pain in his head prevented him from following. Hunting. Eating.

When he was finally freed to hunt, he turned his head this way and that as he sought the steady thump-thump that drew him. He moved quickly, the sound growing faster, erratic as he approached, his claw raised to strike and...

He screamed, the siren call drowned out by the torrent of noise. He couldn't see anymore, deafened by the sound he flailed, his claws striking something and he could hear again. He turned to face his prey...
goldarrow: (Default)

[personal profile] goldarrow 2015-05-04 07:08 am (UTC)(link)
I feel rather sorry for it!
Well done.

[identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com 2015-05-04 11:41 am (UTC)(link)
Intense and different point of view. Great drabble!
fififolle: (Primeval - bellhop of doom)

[personal profile] fififolle 2015-05-04 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Great POV of that moment!

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2015-05-06 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Yikes, scary! Great POV of the creature.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] anomalies)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2015-05-11 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Nicely done!