knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
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Title: A Siren Call
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Future Predator, (James Lester).
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 417: White Noise. Definition: a constant background noise; especially : one that drowns out other sounds. Thanks go to Fred for looking this over for me.


He snarled as his prey fled, snapping at the air as the pain in his head prevented him from following. Hunting. Eating.

When he was finally freed to hunt, he turned his head this way and that as he sought the steady thump-thump that drew him. He moved quickly, the sound growing faster, erratic as he approached, his claw raised to strike and...

He screamed, the siren call drowned out by the torrent of noise. He couldn't see anymore, deafened by the sound he flailed, his claws striking something and he could hear again. He turned to face his prey...

Date: 2015-05-04 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Very good.

Date: 2015-05-04 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

Date: 2015-05-04 07:08 am (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
I feel rather sorry for it!
Well done.

Date: 2015-05-04 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*nods* although James would disagree ;)

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

Date: 2015-05-04 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
Intense and different point of view. Great drabble!

Date: 2015-05-04 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Good to know it worked and thanks for reading.

Date: 2015-05-04 03:16 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - bellhop of doom)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Great POV of that moment!

Date: 2015-05-04 06:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, good to know the POV worked and that is an apt icon.

Date: 2015-05-05 07:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Eeep! Great POV


Date: 2015-05-05 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, good to know it worked.

Date: 2015-05-06 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com
Yikes, scary! Great POV of the creature.

Date: 2015-05-06 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Sorry ;) The poor creature wasn't having a good day.

Thanks for reading,

Date: 2015-05-11 02:27 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] anomalies)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Nicely done!

Date: 2015-05-11 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, glad you liked it.

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