knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2014-02-20 09:26 pm

Primeval drabble: Showing Respect

Title: Showing Respect
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Jon Lyle (OC), James Lester
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures and Lyle belongs to Fred. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 355: Submission. Part 46 of my Strange Bedfellows drabble series.


Lyle sighed as he stared at his next task before glancing at James, who nodded and sipped his wine. Bastard was probably content he'd completed his tasks... Lyle just hoped he finished this one, but how hard could it be?

Several attempts later left him aching in places he'd forgotten. What the hell was he missing? He groaned and almost kicked himself when he realised his mistake. Could it be that simple? It was worth a try.

He bowed deeply and waited for the response, grinning when he heard the soft wicker. He carefully patted the horse before tacking him.

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2014-02-20 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Lyle, but at least he figured it out in the end.

[personal profile] samueljames 2014-02-20 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)
At least he figured it out eventually. Nice take on the prompt.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] green shirt stephen)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2014-02-21 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
At least he got there in the end!

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2014-02-21 07:58 am (UTC)(link)

Yes, respect the horse ;)

I hope the clone is also there, watching with interest the goings on - he was intriguing


[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2014-02-21 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Well done, Lyle!
goldarrow: (Default)

[personal profile] goldarrow 2014-02-22 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
Good for Lyle! He always makes it in the end!

[identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com 2014-02-22 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Not just pretty and strong, he is also smart. Well done, Lyle! ^_^
fififolle: (DF - racehorse rush)

[personal profile] fififolle 2014-02-23 10:06 am (UTC)(link)
I think maybe I've missed a bit of the story, but it's nice to see Lyle figuring things out :D

[identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com 2014-02-23 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)

Honestly, Lyle show some respect! Still he figured it out eventually.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2014-03-14 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! He got there eventually.