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Title: Just This Once

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 101 (oops)

Characters: James Lester

Rating: 12

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

A/N: For the P100 Challenge 136: Secret Santa. Many thanks to Fred for the beta.





Lester bit back his groan at the overly-decorated tree, surrounded by presents.


Of course Connor would think an office Secret Santa was a great idea. That Abby and Sarah had aided and abetted him wasn't a surprise. Becker had followed Sarah's lead, and Danny just threw himself into everything.


Lester found himself longing for the far more refined times when Nick, Jenny and Stephen had provided some much needed sanity to Christmas.


Now only he remained to do that and, for once, Lester just couldn't – they reminded him of his own children and he couldn't spoil their fun. Not now.

Date: 2009-12-10 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 6th-dr.livejournal.com
Oh thats so sweet! Nicely done.

Date: 2009-12-10 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Date: 2009-12-10 08:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com

Sad but lovely!

Danny - yep ;)

Date: 2009-12-10 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thank, the bunny wrote it *g*
Yep, it is just Danny.

Date: 2009-12-10 09:23 am (UTC)
fredbassett: (Default)
From: [personal profile] fredbassett
That was sad, but sweet.

The word count is odd, as mine gives it as 100 exactly. I think it depends on how it treats hyphenated words. Mine treats it as one word. Yours is probably counting it as two.

Date: 2009-12-10 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks and thanks again for the beta. It was a very insistent bunny.

Figured out the problem - it is counting the dash in the last paragraph as a word - now all I need to figure out is how to stop it.

Date: 2009-12-10 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
That's lovely, with the sad twist in the tale . . .

Date: 2009-12-10 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, it was a bit sad at the end. I blame the bunny (nods).

Date: 2009-12-10 09:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madcatt82.livejournal.com
Awww, that's so sweet... slightly sad, but sweet all at the same time!

Date: 2009-12-10 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, I was wondering about the prompt and got bit by this bunny.

Date: 2009-12-10 10:28 am (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - Lester by slashybits)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
*hugs Lester very tight*
*sniff*

Date: 2009-12-10 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Lester needs hugging, *pet fifiolle and passes tissues*

Date: 2009-12-10 07:38 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Lester Phone)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
Awwwwwww, that's so bittersweet... See, Lester does have a heart under that snarky exterior!

Date: 2009-12-10 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks. Of course he does, but few see it.

Date: 2009-12-10 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com
awwwww, sweet. Lester has a heart really, he just hides it well.

Date: 2009-12-10 11:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thank you. Of course he does, he just doesn't want it known.

Date: 2009-12-10 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilyroseharper.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwwww! Lester really is a softy

Date: 2009-12-10 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Shhh don't tell anyone *g*

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2009-12-10 10:44 pm (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (andrew and hannah)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Aw, lovely!

And don't worry about the word count - as Fred said I think it's probably counting the hyphenated word as two. And anyway, I do give a bit of leeway if there's only a word or so over :D

Date: 2009-12-10 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, glad you liked it.

Good to know about the leeway - that last word is often a bugger.

Now, if it was counting the hypenated word as two it would make sense, but no, it is counting the dash in the last paragraph as one. *grr*

Date: 2009-12-11 12:00 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: (claudia brown)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Lol, sometimes there really is no understanding how word count applications work!

Date: 2009-12-11 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Certainly not mine.

Date: 2009-12-10 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com
Aaawwww, lovely and very sweet, just what I needed right now to try to get into the Christmas spirit.

"Danny just threw himself into everything"
LOL, that's true.

Date: 2009-12-10 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks and yay for getting you into the Christmas spirit.

Well, that's Danny - leap don't look.

Date: 2009-12-11 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] szychogirl.livejournal.com
Aww, poor Lester is outnumbered now, I'm afraid. Maybe a little Christmas cheer would do him some good.

Nicely done :)

Date: 2009-12-11 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
He's definitely outnumbered, I'm sure the team will get him in the Christmas spirit.
Thanks for reading/commenting.

Date: 2009-12-11 09:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com
Poor Lester. His team does seem to have got younger!

Date: 2009-12-11 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Or at least act younger *g*

Date: 2009-12-13 07:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com
Sweet and sad at once. *hugs poor Lester who has to bear such a burden*

Date: 2009-12-13 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, I blame the bunny that pounced and demanded to be written. *joins in the Lester hug*

Date: 2010-03-03 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tia198.livejournal.com
Love Lester's views on the team and I really love the last line especially when he let Connor live with him :)

Date: 2010-03-03 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading and commenting. Lester can be a softy (just don't tell him that *g*)

Date: 2019-05-09 05:43 am (UTC)
isamazed: (Jenny PriWriMo)
From: [personal profile] isamazed
Yep, don’t spoil it 🤗

Date: 2019-05-09 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
I think, for once, James won't.

Thanks for reading.

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