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knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2009-11-30 01:08 am
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Primeval fic: Prove

Title: Prove

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 167

Characters: Helen Cutter

Rating: 15

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

A/N: Thanks to the wonderful Luka for the beta.





From an early age she had always been able to wrap men around her finger. Her father was merely the first of many who gave her whatever she desired.


Later, she had taken what her boyfriends could give her, always making sure to keep them keen.


Later still, she had set her sights upon a suitable husband to advance her chosen career. She identified the one she would have, but it would seem to be his idea when he proposed to her.


Now, as Helen glared at her captor, she knew this was one man she couldn't manipulate with her feminine wiles. On this one occasion she wished she was a man, for then she would have a chance with him.


It was bloody inconvenient of him to be gay, though it challenged her. How she would love to make him want her, need to take her, have her - just to prove to the world that no one could ever deny Helen Cutter anything she wanted.

[identity profile] sunsets-dinos.livejournal.com 2009-11-30 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, I love it! You're a stubborn wench, Helen dear. Lovely fic. I want to know who the man is. *big grin*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Couldn't decide who, so take your pick. *g*

[identity profile] rodlox.livejournal.com 2009-11-30 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
probably Nick. ;)

the drabble is finely-crafted, btw.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the kind comment.

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2009-11-30 07:50 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, *very* intriguing -- wonder who our mystery man is *g*. And this is such a convincing portrayal of HELEN!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks and thanks again for the beta. Choose your favourite for the mystery man. Good to know I got Helen right.

[identity profile] madcatt82.livejournal.com 2009-11-30 09:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, nice. Very Helen!

And the mystery man... Ryan? Lester? Do tell... please?

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, and as for the mysterious man - pick your favourite. Though I do like both of your options *g*
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[personal profile] fredbassett 2009-11-30 04:57 pm (UTC)(link)
So, who has our Helen just met her match with? Very intriguing:)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks and glad you enjoyed it. Hmm, I wonder, it could be several people *eg*

[identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com 2009-11-30 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Helen. Now she is losing her confidence because Lester.;)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Lester is a possible candidate *eg*
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[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2009-11-30 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
That was very well observed - and I love Helen finding her captor being gay as 'inconvenient' for some reason! :)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks and happy you think I got Helen. Well, to Helen it is an inconvenience *g*

[identity profile] bella-farfalla.livejournal.com 2009-11-30 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha oh Helen, you are so awesome. Who managed to capture Helen?!?

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it. Not sure who captured her.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2009-11-30 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
ooh, very nice. Very... Helen.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, good to know Helen worked.

[identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com 2009-12-01 11:13 am (UTC)(link)
Nice take on Helen :-)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thankyou. Good to know I can write Helen.

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 08:13 am (UTC)(link)

Hee - Jack Harkness perhaps? Though he does swing both ways...

Great end line too!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Possibly, it could be almost anyone.
Thanks - Helen's not one to give up easily.

[identity profile] tia198.livejournal.com 2010-02-23 09:47 am (UTC)(link)
This is a brilliant insight into helen - great fic!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2010-02-23 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks and glad you liked it.