Primeval drabble: Escape?

[knitekat]

Title: Escape?
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester, Jon Lyle (OC), Clone
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace. Oh, and Lyle belongs to Fred.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 334: Autumn Colours. Part 25 of my Strange Bedfellows drabble series and follows from Someone To Lean On.


Two of the three men staggering from the bunker were surprised and suspicious of their easy escape from Helen's clutches. A quick examination of their surroundings revealed a clear trail amongst the fallen leaves that littered the ground.

They paused, the trail might lead them to an anomaly and safety... it would also be the first place Helen would look for them once she realised they were missing. Lyle nodded towards the trail when the clone kicked at a pile of leaves, smiling at the cloud of red and gold that fluttered around him and leaving an obvious bare patch.

Comments

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

*is scared for them*

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Um... possibly wise.

Thanks for reading and we'll see where the prompts take us.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Yes!
Great use of that prompt within this series.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Now they just have to keep out of Helen's clutches *vbeg*

*bows* I was wondering what to do with it, so good to know it worked.

Thanks for reading.

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

Glad the clone can take a moment to appreciate the colours *G*

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked the clone, he's exploring the world outside Helen's control.

Thanks for reading.

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

They're going to struggle to be either quick or discreet, I think.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Probably as James can't move fast and the leaves somewhat hamper being discreet. But... well, we'll have to wait for the next prompt to see what happens next ;)

Thanks for reading.

[fififolle]

How to know which way to go for the best??

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

That is what the boys are wondering... the answer probably depends on the next prompt ;)

Thanks for reading.

[fredbassett]

The clone doing something so carefree in context of this is rather poignant.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good to know it worked, it is the first time he's been free to indulge himself.

Thanks for reading.

[dreamer-98.livejournal.com]

Even though it's a dangerous situation, it's cute that the clone enjoyed kicking the leaves. Lovely.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked that bit, the clone is now free and enjoying himself.

Thanks for reading.

[stealingpennies.livejournal.com]

Great contrast between Lyle and Lester's fear and the clone's playing with the leaves. Nice use of the prompt.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good to know that worked, the clone hasn't quite figure out to be scared, he's too busy enjoying freedom.

Thanks for reading.

[cordeliadelayne]

Lovely use of the prompt!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, good to know it worked. I was meeping with the prompt ;)

Thanks for reading.

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

Aww, nice to see the clone being free like that, even if it is still dangerous.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good to know the clone works. He's enjoying himself, but I think he still knows it is dangerous.

Thanks for reading.

[eriah211.livejournal.com]

So sweet that the clone has a moment of freedom to enjoy the colours of the leaves, but I'm terribly suspicious about the easy escape O_o

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Good to know the clone is working and um... who knows ;)

Thanks for reading.

[goldarrow]

Love the innocence of the clone in this one.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked the clone, he hasn't had much of a life (so far).

Thanks for reading.