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knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2013-09-15 12:12 pm
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Primeval drabble: Needing To Be Clandestine

Title: Needing To Be Clandestine
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Clones, Helen Cutter
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 332: Undercover. Part 21 of my Strange Bedfellows drabble series and continues from Maybe? Thanks go to Fred for looking at it, cheers m'dear.


He watched Helen slap one of them for almost letting the other man escape the Dark Room. He observed silently when She ordered him to his knees before telling one of them to put a gun to the failure's head and pull the trigger.

He stood in the shadows and stared down at the cooling body as a shiver ran down his back. He suddenly understood his own future if She found out he was no longer Hers. He knew he would have to be careful, he would have to conceal his actions from her and from those like him.
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[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2013-09-15 11:21 am (UTC)(link)

I love how the clone has become a major character in this and has a plan - now he needs a name *G*

And that pesky Lyle has been a busy boy, it seems

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-16 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to know the clone works, he's taken on more of a role than expected. *nods* He might have to wait for a name, he needs to get away from Helen first.

*nods* Lyle had fun being pesky, he's not so happy about being caught again.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2013-09-15 11:22 am (UTC)(link)
*whimpers softly so no one will hear*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-16 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
*pets nietie* I'm sure well, almost that everything will work out OK in the end.

Thanks for reading.

cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby maitland)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2013-09-15 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor thing, very scary for him.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-16 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm being mean to the poor clone, although even meaner to the one who failed. It must be scary for him, waking up and realising the danger he's in.

Thanks for reading.
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[personal profile] goldarrow 2013-09-15 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
He is certainly getting an education, isn't he?
Poor thing.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-16 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* Especially on how to be careful and hide his awakening. I know, I'm being mean to him.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2013-09-16 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Very chilling.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-16 07:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to know it worked and thanks for reading.

[identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com 2013-09-20 12:20 pm (UTC)(link)

Blimey! That poor clone is going to need all his wits about him. Helen really is ruthless.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-20 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry ;) The clone will hopefully be fine. *nods* That she is.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2013-09-22 10:23 am (UTC)(link)
Eek! The clone will have to be careful.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-22 02:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry ;) The clone has figured that out... now he just needs to figure out what to do next.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com 2013-09-22 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, clone is getting smarter *cheers him*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-22 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you like the clone, he needs to be smart to survive.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-09-28 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, the clone is learning that being sneaky is good for his health.

Thanks for reading.
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