knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2013-03-28 10:08 pm

Primeval drabble: Disbelief

Title: Disbelief
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Abby Maitland, (James Lester), (Connor Temple)
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 308: Professor Nick Cutter. Part of my Making An Impression drabble series and continues from Not Quite To Plan. Thanks go to Fred for looking at it for me, cheers m'dear.


Abby couldn't believe her eyes when Lester deliberately attracted the attention of the creature before running off with it hard on his heels. She shook the door but when it remained stubbornly closed, she turned to find another way out and her gaze fell on Connor.

Oh fuck!

It had almost broken Connor when he'd lost Nick and the man hadn't been more than a friend and mentor to him. Losing Lester when the man was his lover would shatter him. Bloody hell, when she caught up with Lester she'd definitely be having words with the stupid, noble, heroic idiot.
goldarrow: (Default)

[personal profile] goldarrow 2013-03-28 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
*G* Give him hell, Abby!
Excellent description.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't worry, I'm sure Abby will.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
Our Abby exactly!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Good to know it worked and thanks for reading.

[identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 09:38 am (UTC)(link)
Go Abby!

I love "when she caught up with Lester she'd definitely be having words with the stupid, noble, heroic idiot."

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Abby ftw!

Glad you liked that bit, and I'm sure Abby will.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 10:59 am (UTC)(link)
"she'd definitely be having words with the stupid, noble, heroic idiot."

Best (sweet and heartbreaking) definition ever. I hope she really has a chance to kick his arse, really hard. Love Abby.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked the description. Abby hope she had a chance to kick his arse even James does ;). Go Abby.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 11:06 am (UTC)(link)
Go, Abby, go!
Lester IS a stupid, noble, heroic idiot.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Have no fear, Abby will.

Lester's not happy with that description ;)

Thanks for reading.
fififolle: (Primeval - Abby car Naughty Girl)

[personal profile] fififolle 2013-03-29 11:26 am (UTC)(link)
I feel *very* sorry for Abby and Matt, hahahaha.
Very good stuff :D

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:24 pm (UTC)(link)
You do? Because of Lester?

Thanks, glad you liked it.
fififolle: (Primeval - Matt PriWriMo)

[personal profile] fififolle 2013-03-31 09:56 am (UTC)(link)
They seem to be holding both Connor and Lester together :D

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-31 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, someone's got to ;)

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 12:08 pm (UTC)(link)

Angst Central! is Lester in more danger from the creature or from Abby?

In my mind, Nick and Stephen have been sent off into the Highlands for their safety and to recover (by Lester), while everyone else thinks they're dead *G*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, well, Abby's not likely to kill him ;)

You could be right... or not ;)

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I definitely understand Abby's anger/protectiveness. Connor can't lose Lester. Nice!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* Abby is not happy with James. Would I? ;)

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure Abby's interventions have been the most helpful thing in Connor and Lester's relationship so far...

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-29 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Abby's only got Connor's best interests at heart.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] flaccidduck.livejournal.com 2013-03-30 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
Abby's heart is always in the right place. <3

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-30 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* She does her best.

Thanks for reading.
celeste9: (PriWriMo: abby)

[personal profile] celeste9 2013-03-30 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I wouldn't like to be Lester when Abby gets hold of him!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-30 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Probably true ;)

Thanks for reading.
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2013-03-30 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Go Abby!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-30 08:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sure she will.

Thanks for looking at it for me and for reading.

[identity profile] judithjohn.livejournal.com 2013-03-31 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
Abby's an absolute trooper. :D

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-31 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
That she is.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2013-03-31 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Uh oh! Abby does get very protective over Connor, Lester is in trouble now!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-03-31 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* Abby is. Lester might be better off with the creature ;)

Thanks for reading.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] connor temple)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2013-04-01 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
Lester is all those things, and then some! *g*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-04-01 02:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Lester agrees he's some of those things ;)

Thanks for reading.
clea2011: (Abbylight)

[personal profile] clea2011 2013-04-01 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
:-) Lester should be afraid of over-protective Abby! Probably scarier than the creature!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, Lester probably should be as Abby will be scarier than any creature.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] 47eleven.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
that's our Abby. You go girl!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked Abby and she will definitely go.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] natchris.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 11:07 am (UTC)(link)
Love the way you're writing Abby here.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-04-02 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thanks, glad you liked it.

[identity profile] stealingpennies.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 11:45 am (UTC)(link)

Abby's definitely going to have a few things to say. But first they need to catch Lester and Beastie. (Nice work integrating a difficult prompt for your plot line.)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2013-04-03 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, she will. (Thanks, it took a while so good to know it worked)

Thanks for reading.

[personal profile] samueljames 2014-03-03 09:28 pm (UTC)(link)
I like her description of James in the last line. Now let's just hope she gets to have those words with him.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2014-03-03 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Abby is not very happy with him at the moment. She hopes that too.

Thanks for reading.