Primeval drabble: Waiting For The Storm
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knitekatTitle: Waiting For The Storm
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester, OWC, Dave the future predator
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 287: Silence. Part of my Dreams Of Yesterday drabble series and continues from Thoughts On A Future Predator. Thanks go to Fred for looking it over for me, *hugs* the hound.
James' attention was abruptly brought back to the here and now. He strained his ears, wondering what new danger he had sensed and heard... nothing. Every sound in the jungle was absent, even the future predator stood silent and still as its nostrils twitched.
As the hairs on the back of his neck rose and the shivering cub burrowed closer against him, James tried to slow his rapid breathing, each hitched gasp sounding far too loud in the sudden silence. It felt as if the whole jungle was waiting for a storm to break... or for a predator to attack.
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester, OWC, Dave the future predator
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 287: Silence. Part of my Dreams Of Yesterday drabble series and continues from Thoughts On A Future Predator. Thanks go to Fred for looking it over for me, *hugs* the hound.
James' attention was abruptly brought back to the here and now. He strained his ears, wondering what new danger he had sensed and heard... nothing. Every sound in the jungle was absent, even the future predator stood silent and still as its nostrils twitched.
As the hairs on the back of his neck rose and the shivering cub burrowed closer against him, James tried to slow his rapid breathing, each hitched gasp sounding far too loud in the sudden silence. It felt as if the whole jungle was waiting for a storm to break... or for a predator to attack.
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Date: 2012-11-04 07:38 pm (UTC)This is great!
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Date: 2012-11-05 06:16 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-04 11:38 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-11-05 06:18 pm (UTC)or silenceeither.Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-05 12:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-11-05 06:19 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-05 06:20 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-05 06:41 am (UTC)Very nice indeed. Love the waiting tension.
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Date: 2012-11-05 06:23 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-05 06:25 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-05 08:27 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-11-05 10:10 pm (UTC)and what my muse thinks of *vbeg*Glad it worked and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-05 10:41 pm (UTC)SUSPENSE!!!! Silence can be very scary - well captured
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Date: 2012-11-06 08:51 pm (UTC)Glad you think so and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-06 08:53 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-07 08:07 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-10 09:46 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-16 08:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-11-16 08:41 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading.
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Date: 2012-11-18 06:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-11-18 10:59 pm (UTC)James also hopes he'll escape soon and he is also hoping for a helpful prompt ;)
Thanks for reading.