Primeval drabble: Far Too Late

[knitekat]

Title: Far Too Late

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 100

Characters: James Lester/Mrs Lester (OC)

Rating: 12

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

Warning: Angst

A/N: For the P100 challenge 125 picture. Thanks to the wonderful Fred for the beta. Continues in Seeking Forgiveness.

He's late.

Far too late for her to forgive him.

Especially tonight.

He sighs and closes his eyes as he enters the dining room.

The table set for a candlelit meal.

Two wine glasses abandoned but full.

The expensive bottle of red between them.

An envelope propped against it.

His own envelope is in his pocket, ready to be given.

He still leans it against the bottle.

Even knowing it would not be enough.

That he is far too late to make amends.

That she will not forgive him.

He still tries.

He has to.

Because he still loves her.

Comments

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

*sniffles*

poor Mrs. Lester (and James too)

I hope in the sequel, they can reconcile.

[szychogirl.livejournal.com]

Aww *hugs them both*. Hopefully he can make it up to her somehow. Nicely done :)

[a1cmustangpilot.livejournal.com]

Awww this is sad but at least there is hope at the end for Lester to continue pursuing the love of his wife. That is very admirable about him. :)
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[cordeliadelayne]

Aw, *sniff* Poor Lester.

[fififolle]

That's very sad. And creates a brilliant atmosphere. Well done. I hope we see more of this.

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

Ouch. That was very bittersweet, but also strangely lovely...

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

That's very sad. Great image of the table all ready.

[bella-farfalla.livejournal.com]

*sniffs* Oh Lester. I think you'll need to do better than that to keep her.

[fredbassett]

Poor Lester. I hope he finds a way to get her back.

[joereaves.livejournal.com]

Awww. I like this, I really do. I hope he can do something to fix it but I like the idea of him wanting to stay together butit disintegrating around him and him not able to stop it.

[talliw.livejournal.com]

It's always sad to see the end of a marriage. Great drabble.

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

*wibbles* Oh James... That's really sad! :(