knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2012-09-21 01:52 pm

Primeval drabble: Protective

Title: Protective
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: OWC, (James Lester)
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 281: This Means War. Part of my Dreams Of Yesterday drabble series and continues from Family Ties. Sorry, but this is the prompt's fault. Thanks go to Fred for looking it over for me, cheers m'dear.

A low growl built in the cub's throat as he stood in front of his daddy, his fur was all fluffed up and his ears flat against his skull as the footsteps approached ever closer.

His heart pounded in his little chest and his tail curled between his hind-legs but he refused to abandon his post and abandon his daddy.

If anyone thought they'd hurt his daddy with him there, they'd face his teeth first. He was quite prepared to fight to protect his daddy, just as his daddy had fought to save him.

He growled as the vegetation parted.

[identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com 2012-09-21 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely - with a great sense of tension

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2012-09-21 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, very tense!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-21 05:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it, the cub is very protective of his daddy.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-21 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, the prompt made me do it ;)

Thanks for reading, the cub wishes it wasn't as tense.
ext_27141: (Lester)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2012-09-21 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwww... But also, uh oh!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-21 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
The cub is aww-worthy. Hee, sorry, but the prompt made me do it.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2012-09-21 10:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Very good!

[identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 02:00 am (UTC)(link)
A really fine drabble!

[identity profile] flaccidduck.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
Terrific!
celeste9: (wolf (house stark))

[personal profile] celeste9 2012-09-22 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
Uh oh! But the cub is still really adorable!
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2012-09-22 07:24 am (UTC)(link)
Yay, go Cub!!

Lovely tense ending.

[identity profile] natchris.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
Great tension!

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 10:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! Very cute!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, glad you liked it.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
The cub is happy you liked him the drabble.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*Cub wags his tail*

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Possibly uh oh, possibly not.

*cub wags tail* He's very happy to be really adorable.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
The cub is feeling very protective. Glad you liked the ending *paws crossed* for the next prompt ;)

Thanks for reading and for the paw holding.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked the tension and thanks for reading.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, the cub is happy to be cute.

Thanks for reading.
clea2011: (Lester suit)

[personal profile] clea2011 2012-09-22 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely but eek! I'm hoping the vegetation has parted to reveal Abby or a medic or just someone of a friendly persuasion standing there rather than anything that might hurt the dear little brave cub or Lester!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-22 09:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* The cub says he is lovely, he is also being a very brave cub for his daddy. Um, if it isn't, poor Lester might be in trouble but it all depends on the next prompt.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2012-09-25 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
eeeek! Brave little cub!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-25 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry ;) The cub has to be brave for his daddy.

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2012-09-27 11:25 am (UTC)(link)

Eeeek! I'm sure it is the next prompt that the cub is facing!

Love protective kidfic and CubView ;)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-27 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, the cub might or might not be facing the next prompt ;)

Hee, the cub is kidfic? He was perfect for telling the fic.

Thanks for reading.
Edited 2012-09-27 20:22 (UTC)

[identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com 2012-09-28 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely story. The little one is very brave.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-29 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it. *nods* The little cub is determined to be brave for his daddy.

Thanks for reading.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] connor temple)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2012-09-29 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-09-30 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked the little cub, he is definitely aw-worthy.

Thanks for reading.