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knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2012-02-13 09:37 pm

Primeval drabble: Watching And Waiting

Title: Watching And Waiting
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100 x 2
Characters: Connor Temple, Ethan Dobrowski
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 249: Hidden In Plain Sight. Part of my Making An Impression drabble series and follows Hope.


Connor allowed Becker to guide him towards the car. His fear growing with every minute James was in Ethan's hands. He was a cold blooded killer and...

He stared out of the car's window as it took him back to the ARC. Watching without really seeing as Becker's men and the police cordoned off the scene from the crowd gathered in morbid curiosity.

It was only hours later that Connor dropped his mug with a gasp. Ethan had been there, one of the crowd. Standing in the open and no-one had noticed him. How could they not have seen him?

****

Ethan pulled his coat collar up and kept his head down as he stood amongst the curious crowd. He observed the police forensic team entering the flat and smiled to himself. He had been careful to leave the flat exactly as he had wanted it.

Ethan's attention was caught as Becker helped Connor into a car. He had to fight the urge to duck when the boy glanced his way. It would draw too much attention to himself and Ethan had no wish to do that. Not yet. He had plans and they would take time to set in motion.

[identity profile] flaccidduck.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
These are great drabbles.

I don't know how you tell a story so well in so few words.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, glad you liked them.

Um, this one took about 5 attempts ;)

[identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, these are fantastic drabbles.

You write Ethan so vividly.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thanks, I appear to have an Ethan muse since the Jan teamfest.

[identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
WOW! This was great. Evil!Ethan is EVIL! *MEEP*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, I think Tay approves. My Ethan muse is having fun being evil *nods* Sorry.

[personal profile] samueljames 2012-02-13 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Ethan really seems to delight in being evilly manipulative.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
He does, doesn't he ;) Thanks for reading.
clea2011: (Ethan)

[personal profile] clea2011 2012-02-13 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, very good! Ethan is very creepy. :)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, glad you liked it. Ethan says he likes being creepy ;)

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 07:58 am (UTC)(link)

Great uses of the prompt!

Give him back, Ethan!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it.

Hee, do you think Ethan will listen to you?

Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 10:55 am (UTC)(link)
Eeek. Poor Connor. I hope they will find Lester.

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, I am being mean again ;) Connor (and Lester) hopes they do to. Thanks for reading.
fredbassett: (Anomaly - Ethan)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2012-02-14 11:43 am (UTC)(link)
Very chilling!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, I appear to be in the possession of an Eek!Ethan muse.

[identity profile] phoebezu.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 02:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Another brilliant use of the prompt, but... poor Connor!!! And poor Lester, too!!!! :(
Nice fic, anyway! :)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* I am being mean to Connor and Lester. Thanks, glad you liked it.

[identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Fab drabbles! Poor Connor.

I can't help it- I still like Ethan even when he's being mean to the boys *ducks and runs*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, glad you liked them. *nods* I'm being mean to him, but what about poor Lester?

I think you are probably safe and don't need to run away maybe
ext_27141: (Connor)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Meep meep meep!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 08:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry, I seem to be in procession of an eek!Ethan muse at the moment. Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2012-02-14 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
eeeeeeeek!!!!!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-15 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry ;) Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] basched.livejournal.com 2012-02-15 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome drabbles...Connor dropping the cup, realizing Ethan was there...right in front of him...reminded me a little of the notice board in Usual Suspects.

Ethan is Keyser Soze!!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-15 11:38 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* Thanks and glad you liked it. He is? Haven't seen the film
fififolle: (Primeval - Ethan)

[personal profile] fififolle 2012-02-17 10:49 am (UTC)(link)
Ethan with a plan is scary!!!!!!
*hides*

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-17 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Oops, poor Fifi. Ethan is not looking happy ;) Thanks for reading.
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] armed stephen and abby)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2012-02-18 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, very ominous!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-18 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Ethan does ominous well *nods*
celeste9: (primeval: lester)

[personal profile] celeste9 2012-02-18 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, so creepy! He's watching them!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-18 03:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Ethan is happy to be creepy and says of course he was watching them ;) Thanks for reading.
Edited 2012-02-18 15:52 (UTC)

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-18 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Um, yes? Ethan is having fun. Thanks for reading.

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2012-02-18 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
*facepalm* Meep! I meant Meep!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-02-18 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! Blame Ethan ;)

[identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com 2012-03-10 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
*bites her nails*
Bad, bad Ethan!

[identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com 2012-03-10 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*mind your nails*

Hee, Ethan is a bad boy.

Thanks for reading.