knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2011-09-24 09:44 pm

Primeval drabble: Counting Days

Title: Counting Days
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester, Abby Maitland
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 229: Backwards. Part of my Dreams Of Yesterday drabble series and set before Nature Or Nurture. Thanks to Fred for looking at it for me.


Abby flinched when James threw something to the ground and stomped off into the forest. She quickly trailed after him. The area wasn't safe for someone not paying attention to his surroundings.

James stopped after a short distance and turned to glare at her. “Leave me alone unless you can get me home.” With that, he walked back to their camp and ignored her.

Abby sighed as she noticed the notched wood James had discarded so violently earlier. She didn't need to count to know there were 56 marks, one for each day they had been stuck in the past.

[personal profile] samueljames 2011-09-24 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor James. It's got to be tough though so staying positive all the time couldn't be easy. Hopefully he's not stomped off into harms way.

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2011-09-24 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't blame Lester for feeling racked off! I like Abby making sure he's safe.

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2011-09-24 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, poor kids. :(
fififolle: (Primeval - Nick sands of time)

[personal profile] fififolle 2011-09-25 08:36 am (UTC)(link)
Oh dear. Poor things :(
Loved the emotion of this!

[identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 10:10 am (UTC)(link)
Tsk, tsk, Lester. Taking your anger out on Abby won't help the situation. It's not her fault you are stranded.
ext_27141: (Abby)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 10:33 am (UTC)(link)
Really like this. Anyone would be affected like this by the situation they're stuck in - even James!
fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2011-09-25 11:10 am (UTC)(link)
Oh no, poor James!

[identity profile] prehistoriccat.livejournal.com 2011-09-25 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
*meep* Poor James.

Can I just say how much I am loving this relationship you're developing with Abby & Lester, its a pleasure to read.

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2011-09-27 06:40 am (UTC)(link)

56... No wonder he's getting angsty! Poor loves.

cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby and cutter)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2011-09-28 12:21 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, poor James!

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2011-10-01 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
56 days. It must be nerve wracking not knowing if and when rescue will come.