Primeval drabble: To Bar The Gates

[knitekat]

Title: To Bar The Gates
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For P100 challenge 214: And Then There Were None. Angsty. Thanks to Fred for looking it over for me.


How long could we go on like this? How many more times could we break? How many times could we piece everything back together and expect it to hold?

I just didn't know.

We staggered from one disaster to another. The list of the dead and missing grew with each anomaly. Hart. Cutter. Abby. Connor. Danny. Sarah. How many more?

Even Becker's resignation only surprised me by how long he struggled with his guilt. I didn't try to convince him to stay.

What was the point?

We had been shut down. Now no one was left to bar the gates.

Comments

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

Eek! That's more angsty than a very angsty thing . . . It works well in first person.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

The angst bunny wanted to play, I'm afraid, and I won't let it into my two drabble-verse (yet), so it made me write this ;) Glad you liked it, and that the first person worked.

[sunspecops.livejournal.com]

****whimper!!!!!***

(((((lester)))))

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Oops. Don't worry, they re-open ;) Thanks for reading.

[thelibraniniquity]

Oooh. That is indeed angsty. I love that last sentence.

[fredbassett]

Oh meep!!!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Hee, angst does seem to be my default setting. Thanks for reading. I liked the last sentence too.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*pets the hound* They will be fine *nods* And thanks again for the beta.

[fififolle]

Oh god!! Alooooooone. *wibble*

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

////Even Becker's resignation only surprised me by how long he struggled with his guilt.////

*Meeeeps*

Great last line. Poor Lester - again!

[reggietate.livejournal.com]

Oooh, angsty Lester! I like! :-)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

It'll all be fine in the end *nods and hugs fifi*

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

I was mean to poor Becker as well as Lester here. But I'm sure they will be fine. Thanks for reading.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Poor Lester with you liking his angst ;) Thanks for reading and glad you liked it.

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

*wibbles* Gorgeous angst!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*hugs* The angst bunny bit and demanded fic *nods* Thanks for reading.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Meep! Super angst, especially through writing it in first person.

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

Poor Lester.

[ebonyfeather.livejournal.com]

Wow, great drabble! Poor Lester.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

The angst bunny got demanding and then it just went 1st person so I'm glad you liked it (even with the angst)

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*nods* I was mean to him again. Thanks for reading.

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Thanks, glad you liked it. I'm sure (know) Lester will be fine.

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

meep! Angst overload!

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Sorry, the angst bunny demanded fic *nods*

[talliw.livejournal.com]

*hugs Lester*

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

*joins in the hug* The angst bunny demanded angst *nods*

[cordeliadelayne]

Oh noes! :(

[knitekat.livejournal.com]

Don't worry, S4 rescued them all :) Thanks for reading.