Primeval drabble: One Day

[knitekat]

Title: One Day

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 100

Characters: Unknown

Rating: 12

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

A/N: For the P100 challenge 185 Children. Angst. Thanks go to Luka for the beta.

He wakes in a cold sweat and shivers in the night, the screams of the children still echoing in his ears.

He knows there was nothing he could have done for them, but that didn't mean he'd given up on them.

He should have done more, much more and now he'd had the chance.

One day he'll figure out what he should have done differently.

One day he will make the correct choice to set it right and there won't be any screams.

One day soon and the nightmares will be all that is left of what shouldn't have happened.

Comments

[canadian-jay.livejournal.com]

Eek! Timey-wimey, though, yay!

[lukadreaming.livejournal.com]

Ooh! Eek! Timey-wimey mystery!

[echo-fangirl.livejournal.com]

Eep! That's just a bit dark!

[casy-dee.livejournal.com]

Chilling! Great drabble... very vivid.

[rodlox.livejournal.com]

very haunted.

>One day he will make the correct choice to set it right and there won't be any screams.
>One day soon and the nightmares will be all that is left of what shouldn't have happened.
I can't help but think this is what Helen meant in the s2 finale by bringing them all back.

very great work.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Very angsty with a glimmer of hope.

[fififolle]

Aw. It could be any of them. (Well, any of the men...)
*hugs them*
Great atmosphere.

[telperion-15.livejournal.com]

Meep! Very atmospheric!

[fredbassett]

That was great. Very vivid and very angsty.

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

Eeeek - I can imagine most of the Primeval guys thinking that! Very vivid

[cordeliadelayne]

Oh, eek! Very haunting.

[lsellersfic.livejournal.com]

Eeek! *shivers*

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

meep, that's a scary and powerful drabble.