Great story! I was happy to see you bringing Jenny and Ryan back, especially in light of the interview fiasco. I think you did a really good job of capturing Lester's level of stress and frustration. I also found it really touching that he had feelings for Becker but was afraid to express them.

As everyone else has said, you did an excellent job of writing that action scene and keeping us all in a state of suspense, especially when Lester found Vera and couldn't find Becker. I love the way in which everyone at the ARC had placed bets on Lester and Becker, not to mention Lyle's joke about the tank. :-D