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Title: Forever Alone
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Helen Cutter
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For P100 prompt 616: Darkness.


Helen gritted her teeth and stepped into the milling herd which lay between her and her destination. She had to sidestep as one moved into her path, seemingly never noticing her.

She shook her head, wondering how many of them would survive what she’d seen, where she’d been. It amazed her that so many managed to survive their daily lives when they were so immersed in their own world, headphones blocking their hearing, gazes glued to their telephone screens.

It was if they were all blind to the wonders of the world surrounding them. Forever alone, even in the crowd.

Date: 2019-02-25 09:49 pm (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
Heee!
Nice use of the prompt - and a great mental whiplash as the reader realises that she's in modern times!

Date: 2019-02-25 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*bows*

Glad you liked it.. and good to know the setting worked too.

Thanks for reading.

Date: 2019-02-26 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Very good.

Date: 2019-02-26 06:38 am (UTC)
isamazed: (Jenny PriWriMo)
From: [personal profile] isamazed
Ah, I like unexpected twists. Nice one!

Date: 2019-02-26 07:46 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Dresden Files - Magic)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Brilliant.

Date: 2019-02-27 12:45 am (UTC)
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] green shirt stephen)
From: [personal profile] cordeliadelayne
Nicely done!

Date: 2019-03-01 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

Date: 2019-03-01 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Thanks, I had the idea but couldn't get it to work straight away, so glad you liked it. *bows*

Date: 2019-03-01 09:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
*bows* Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

Date: 2019-03-01 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

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