ETA: It's funny, but deciphering the Cockney was an effort even as a Brit! (Also Quinn started to sound like a very different Danny in my head, which didn't help matters!) I do love the sparseness, though, and I can tell what's going on without any action tags, so bravo on that. :)
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Date: 2018-08-06 07:22 pm (UTC)ETA: It's funny, but deciphering the Cockney was an effort even as a Brit! (Also Quinn started to sound like a very different Danny in my head, which didn't help matters!) I do love the sparseness, though, and I can tell what's going on without any action tags, so bravo on that. :)