That was a great action story - really tense and exciting, and it was great to see Lester in the thick of the action. I think you handled him really well - he had a good mix of competence with the weapon, but the civilian's fear and nervousness about the situation too.
Although I had a horrible feeling all the way through that I knew what was going to happen to poor Tom. In some ways I'd quite like to see something like this happen to Lester in the actual series (although maybe not child death!), so we can a proper emotional reaction to something from him.
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Date: 2010-05-16 08:53 pm (UTC)Although I had a horrible feeling all the way through that I knew what was going to happen to poor Tom. In some ways I'd quite like to see something like this happen to Lester in the actual series (although maybe not child death!), so we can a proper emotional reaction to something from him.