Date: 2010-05-12 03:32 am (UTC)
This is awesome! I love the way you've incorporated certain aspects of series 2 and 3 canon into this story! With Christine, Leek and Helen lurking in the background, I'm getting a little anxious for our heroes. Well, at least they can entertain themselves with HOT sex in the mean time! *g* Both of the sex scenes were fabulous, especially the one with Lester's silk ties!

I like the way you take things to their next logical step, with Lester suggesting that Abby, Connor and Jenny get more experience in the field in anticipation of them becoming team leaders. It makes sense that Lester would want to form more teams and recruit more soldiers. Lastly, I enjoyed those hints of the wolf in Lester, with his growling and scaring Lorraine when he hears about Leek, not to mention his restless pacing.
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