ext_63596 ([identity profile] rusty-armour.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] knitekat 2010-05-01 10:57 pm (UTC)

Yaaaay! Friday was totally worth waiting for! Okay, I read this in the very early part of Saturday and I'm commenting a day later, but still...Fridays are awesome! :-D

I applaud your choice of presenting this story through both Lester's and Cutter's POVs. I loved both the eagerness and nervousness from Lester. It seems typical of him to face the issue head on and give Cutter such a, uh, visual reminder of the agreement they'd made. *g* I found it touching that Cutter was concerned about taking things too quickly with Lester and was actually thinking about that very thing before he walked into the bedroom. It's sweet that he tried to be so careful and gentle and seemed genuinely surprised when Lester said he'd like to repeat the experience. :-)

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