Your world-building really is second to none. This is fabulous, with really great attention to detail all the way through, plus its a fab premise with weres being forced into illegal fights. And I think I know who's behind it. *g*
I think my favourite exchange was this one:
“Why join a military which would dismiss you for something they knew when they recruited you?” Lester replied, continuing before Lyle could answer. “To try and make a difference.”
“I joined because I liked guns and blowing things up,” Lyle remarked, startling a laugh out of Lester. “That's better.”
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Date: 2015-03-08 04:42 pm (UTC)I think my favourite exchange was this one:
“Why join a military which would dismiss you for something they knew when they recruited you?” Lester replied, continuing before Lyle could answer. “To try and make a difference.”
“I joined because I liked guns and blowing things up,” Lyle remarked, startling a laugh out of Lester. “That's better.”
Utterly perfect character moment on both sides.
I really like this series.