Primeval drabble: Maybe?

[knitekat]

Title: Maybe?
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: James Lester, Helen Cutter, Clone
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 331: Magnetic. Part 20 of my Strange Bedfellows drabble series and continues from Just Didn't Understand. Thanks go to Fred for looking at this for me, cheers m'dear.


He'd been sent to bring the man to Her again, and now stood in the shadows, watching him with interest.

How could he ignore the need to please Her? To do as She commanded? A need that even now drew him to Her, waiting Her instructions and helpless to resist Her call. Every time he tried to pull away, he was dragged back towards her...

He frowned slightly, just like those blocks he'd found. The ones that usually moved together but sometimes shot apart.

Maybe the man could show him how he did that... maybe, he could do it too.

Comments

[cordeliadelayne]

Ooh, I like his thought process here.

[nietie.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow, brilliant use of the prompt. Such a great look at the inner struggles of the clone.

[kristen-mara.livejournal.com]

Defective clone in Aisle 4! *G*

I love how the clone is gradually doubting Helen and getting his free will back.

[deinonychus-1.livejournal.com]

Ooooh! Interesting, the clone is having thoughts of independence.

[fififolle]

That clone is too clever for his own good! :)

[misa-ffection.livejournal.com]

Ooh, fabulous!

[eriah211.livejournal.com]

*cheers for the clone to keep waking up*
*hopes the clone keeps it quiet*

Another great part of this series *wants more*

[dreamer-98.livejournal.com]

Great use of the prompt. Hopefully the clone can fight the pull he feels to Helen and break away.

[stealingpennies.livejournal.com]

I like the growing self-awareness of the clone. It'll be interesting to see how he develops.

[fredbassett]

I love the development of the clone in this :)