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knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2012-08-12 05:58 pm

Primeval drabble: He Just Had To Try Harder

Title: He Just Had To Try Harder
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Connor Temple, Abby Maitland
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 275: Faster, Higher, Stronger. Part of my Making An Impression drabble series and continues from Now What? Thanks to Fred for looking it over for me, cheer muchly.


Connor blinked the sweat from his eyes as he tried to circumvent lockdown. He couldn't help fearing he'd made a mistake with the upgrade, that he'd been in too much of a rush to put their plan into action.

He made a final alteration and tried to cancel lockdown, but the computer refused to obey. He closed his eyes in defeat for a moment before he felt a hand on his shoulder. He glanced up and saw the confidence in Abby's eyes.

If Abby believed in him, Connor knew he could save them all.

He just had to try harder.
clea2011: (Connor)

[personal profile] clea2011 2012-08-12 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Come on Connor, you can do it! Very exciting :-)
goldarrow: (Default)

[personal profile] goldarrow 2012-08-12 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay for Abby knowing what Connor needed.
And yay for Connor rediscovering his self-confidence!

I love these little looks inside the characters.

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2012-08-12 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay for Abby! And go, Connor!

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2012-08-12 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Great Connor and Abby moment.

[identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com 2012-08-12 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
They're a fabulous team!

[identity profile] dreamer-98.livejournal.com 2012-08-12 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely. Sometimes knowing someone else believes in you is all it takes.

[identity profile] flaccidduck.livejournal.com 2012-08-12 11:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*cheers and yells encouragement*

We know he'll get there!!

[identity profile] joshinator.livejournal.com 2012-08-13 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
"If Abby believed in him, Connor knew he could save them all."

Good one!!
celeste9: (priwrimo: connor/abby)

[personal profile] celeste9 2012-08-13 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
Go Connor! We all know you can do it. :)

[identity profile] judithjohn.livejournal.com 2012-08-13 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
You can do it Connor!

*waves possums and koalas*

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2012-08-13 10:29 am (UTC)(link)

Love that Abby's confidence gives Connor confidence!

fredbassett: (Default)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2012-08-13 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice look at Connor's determination.

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2012-08-13 06:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Go on Connor! Realise someone on the inside is doing it deliberately!!!

[identity profile] eriah211.livejournal.com 2012-08-13 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Go, Connor! He just needs more self-confidence.
ext_27141: (Connor Mission Control)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2012-08-13 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep, we have faith in you too, Connor!
fififolle: (Primeval - Connor hat)

[personal profile] fififolle 2012-08-13 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
*cheers him on*
Nice moment!

[identity profile] tay-21.livejournal.com 2012-08-13 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
You can do it, Connor! Abby believes in you and everyone is counting on you. Waves pom poms for Connor. *\o/* *\o/*
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby and cutter)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2012-08-15 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, I'm sure he can do it!

[identity profile] ebonyfeather.livejournal.com 2012-08-15 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course he can do it! Abby knows that.

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2012-08-21 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
You can do it, Connor!

[identity profile] basched.livejournal.com 2012-10-04 05:43 am (UTC)(link)

This was great! With Abby supporting him, Connor is certainly not giving up! Excellent!

[personal profile] samueljames 2014-02-26 06:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Connor. Very tense drabble but I'm glad he's sure of Abby's support.