knitekat: (Lester: down but not out)
knitekat ([personal profile] knitekat) wrote2012-02-11 07:18 pm

Primeval drabble: He Had Missed It

Title: He Had Missed It
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Ethan Dobrowski
Rating: 12
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 249: Hidden In Plain Sight. Part of my Dreams Of Yesterday drabble series and continues from To The Rescue.


Ethan made a point of watching Lester from then on. Oh, he was subtle about it and no one noticed what he was doing. No one, except Lester himself who had quirked an eyebrow at him.

It was annoying, actually, when Ethan realised he had only seen what Lester had wanted him to see – the incompetence that hid the man's real capabilities. Ethan just couldn't believe he had misjudged Lester. OK, the rest of the tribe had missed it too, but that didn't make Ethan feel any better. He prided himself on seeing everything and he had missed it.

[identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com 2012-02-11 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the thought of these two facing off against each other.

[personal profile] samueljames 2012-02-11 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Very enjoyable. Love Lester revealing only what he wants to and Ethan picking up on that.
clea2011: (Ethan)

[personal profile] clea2011 2012-02-11 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh Lester, you need to watch your back now! Good drabble :)
ext_27141: (Conclusive Proof)

[identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com 2012-02-11 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Now I'm worried about what Ethan's reaction to this is going to be! *meeps*

[identity profile] talliw.livejournal.com 2012-02-11 11:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe, Lester is more clever than you, Ethan.

[identity profile] freddiejoey.livejournal.com 2012-02-12 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Very nicely done.

This is a great series.
fififolle: (Primeval - Ethan)

[personal profile] fififolle 2012-02-12 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, Ethan has the measure of Lester now. Nice.

[identity profile] nietie.livejournal.com 2012-02-12 10:22 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I feel tension building between those two.
fredbassett: (Anomaly - Ethan)

[personal profile] fredbassett 2012-02-12 07:48 pm (UTC)(link)
very neat!

[identity profile] kristen-mara.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 09:07 am (UTC)(link)

Ooo - now is Ethan going to be grateful or go nasty...?

[identity profile] basched.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 10:07 am (UTC)(link)

Oh wow...I liked that...this drabble certainly put some lovely ideas into my head! Ethan vs Lester! Nuff said!! XD Can imagine how pissed off Ethan would be for misjudging Lester...and of course how delightfully smug Lester would be!

[identity profile] deinonychus-1.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
ooh, this is turning into a batlle of wills!

[identity profile] lsellersfic.livejournal.com 2012-02-13 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh Lester! You can't help taunting him just a little!
cordeliadelayne: ([primeval] abby and cutter)

[personal profile] cordeliadelayne 2012-02-16 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice drabble :D